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"You think?" Scott grinned.
"Oh, honey, last night was just the tip of the iceberg," Jillian laughed.
"What does that mean?" Scott asked, feeling like he was missing the joke somehow.
"Let's just say that you shouldn't take it for granted that it was her ass that she was talking about taking a fucking," Jillian replied, a serious tone in her voice.
"You're kidding, right?" Scott asked, concern now in his. "You gotta be, she couldn't have meant that..."
Scott paused in mid-sentence, realizing that there was really no reason why she couldn't have.
"You're playing with my head," Scott said.
"Maybe, maybe not," Jillian smiled. "She'll be back in New York next month, you can find out then.
"Oh...my...God!" Scott said in a long, drawn out breath.
"Come on, lover, let's go home," Jillian laughed as she took his hand and they headed for the door.
It was going to be a very long month.
END
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 6 years agoNicely layered. Each time the story was upended, the plot veering, then settling on a new take, something would still pop up anew, unexpected, uncertain.
GeorgeAndersonalmost 6 years ago@Ann Douglas, please don't put this one down as one that didn't work. I thought Jillian's leaving Scott hanging was perfectly in character. She wouldn't hurt him for anything, and he knows it, but tease him? Yes, I think so. I think he has a bigger problem anyway: what does he do for her birthday?
GA
Anonymousalmost 6 years agoGood to have a fresh kind of story. The deception was great! This one didn't fail, it's what the reader's own mind thinks. Thank you for the story.
Anonymousalmost 6 years agoI loved the elaborate misdirection. The way you continued to portray his disappointment was great. I loved that he did not suspect anything and that his wife did not give anything away by her actions. I laughed at those who took something away from the story that wasn’t there. And the nut job complaining about “all that religious shit” is simply that, a nut job. There was nothing you said that could be taken the wrong way and no denying the things you stated do happen. Smart people, whether devout or not, understand that. I also laugh at those who seem to know just how this “fictional story” will play out. I think they forget that you are the author not them. Don’t worry, they whine and complain about any story where the wife sleeps with others and they automatically start screaming how it will end in divorce or with rampant STD’s. Too funny. Please continue this story with another chapter. I’d love to find out where your head has these two going.
deblackbusteralmost 6 years agoLooks like the author has many more stories worth checking out too!
