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Dominantwhisperover 6 years agoGood story, but far too short.
It's well written and enticing, but could be so much better with more depth and details.
The_Iron_Maidenover 6 years agoVery high quality
Too many stories are (I'm guilty of this as well) sped up, poorly written, haphazardly edited, etc. Especially Mind Control stories.
But this? This is truly well done. Short, but not too fast, sexy, but not silly in concept, and overall a good read. 5 star rating easy, and I hope to read more from you soon.
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I find myself always learning. About the world. About people. And about the depths of our own desires. Then, I write about that.
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