All Comments on 'I'm Yours'

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liz33ndliz33ndover 6 years ago
five star

I liked the story flow, and quite erotic.

The_Iron_MaidenThe_Iron_Maidenover 6 years ago
Very high quality

Too many stories are (I'm guilty of this as well) sped up, poorly written, haphazardly edited, etc. Especially Mind Control stories.

But this? This is truly well done. Short, but not too fast, sexy, but not silly in concept, and overall a good read. 5 star rating easy, and I hope to read more from you soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
more!

Write a sequel! That was very well written.

DominantwhisperDominantwhisperover 6 years ago
Good story, but far too short.

It's well written and enticing, but could be so much better with more depth and details.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

The cat would have killed him. Cats know s fake when they see them.

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