All Comments on 'It Started in a Cabin Ch. 02'

Awesome writing! Keep it up!

Btw, that other Anon who said 'rubbish' has been trolling everyone's stories with the exact same thing. It's kinda funny. Pathetic actually, but funny.

I just read chapter 1 and now chapter 2, i loved every single bit of it, perfect build up, and not going too fast, can't wait for more

PLEASE finnish the next chapter soon! The Whole story has been incredible!

I had to go back to Chapter one to see if I had read it. As soon as I saw the name Scar I knew what was happening. I like this series so far and am waiting for the next. 5 of 5 was the best I could vote but would give it more if I could. Boy-scout and Red. Love it.

I read the first part and was hoping that wasn't the end of the saga of Scar and Chris. This is a very well written story and it actually made me laugh then it made me cry at the end of the second chapter. I can't wait to read the next chapters. Way to go..;..

Very professional writing and story telling. I would give it more than five stars if that was possible. Can't say enough good things about it.

Chapter One was awesome...chapter 02 even better...as I said before love your writing style and the way you weave the all the elements together...OH the anticipation for Ch. 03...now where did I put my patience?

Omg More please... this was perfect. I just want to give you a hug this was amazing

Thanks everyone for your wonderful comments on this sorry and the previous part as well! I really appreciate all the kind words and patience you folks have shown me. I am working on part three as well as a new story that I'm possibly considering doing as an e-book.

Again, thank you so much!

Chiara

P.s. I always take it in to consideration the fact that a person pans my work anonymously

This needs to be a movie......would make a great chick flick. More please.

You have written a great story! Well written and developed. I can see the story in my mine as I read it. I also love the way you don't rush into sex but instead slowly develop the charters. I especially like the way you have the prarents being understanding and supporting them. Keep up the good work and looking forward to the continuing story and chapthers.

One of the best I've read In a long while. Good story line. Just love your style.

What a chapter!!! ty for the excellent chapter. / bill

When I saw this new Chapter I went back and read the whole story from the start. Just fabulous, slow build up between them, enough passion to keep one interested without a lot of raunchy blow by blow sex.

Storyline has endless possibilities, but best one is just a build up to a happy ending with both of them getting together for the long term.

Great stuff, can't wait for the next chapter.

Thanks for the wonderful story!! So much character development and Loving interaction!! Definitely looking forward to the next several chapters!!

I've been eagerly awaiting the second chapter ever since I read the first part and it was well worth the wait. I'm glad time didn't diminish the care you took into continuing the story. I love the slow build and further character development as it seems realistic to how this kind of relationship would go. Can't wait for the next one, keep up the great work.

Just awesome

Excellent story! I also found chapter 2 and went back and read chapter 1 first.

You have written a story with believeable events and your character interactions are so realistic. Thank you for sharing your wonderful story.

RecHiker

ill say this as iam sure as everyone else has .plz dont stop this story

Please continue the story. It is outstanding.

One of the best that I have read. Look forward to the next one.

Loved chapters 1 & 2. When can we expect chapter 3?

Purely as a literature is was a good story. But wtf...

I was looking for something to read before trying to go to bed. After reading chapter 1 i was left with such a nice high feeling that i decided to stay up far too late and read chapter 2. Now its 3:30 in the morning and its been replaced with one hell of a low...

Amazing story. Love the way you write. The slow build-up and throwing in a nasty ex-boyfriend who has a crazy idea of who Scarlett belongs too. Wauw!!! Please don't leave us hanging here and not know what happens to Chris and Scarlett. Hope you will post chapter 3 soon.

Would love to give more than 5 * but can't.. :-D

Thank you for this beautiful story.

I like the storyline on this and that you are not rushing them into the sack. I like a great build-up. I certainly hope it won't be nine months until Ch.03 is complete. When a story is really good, you want to get onto the next part as quickly as you can!

Absolutely fantastic!! Can't wait to read ch.3... just don't take to long to get it out haha

Not usually a fan of serialised stories but this one is great

I loved both chapters so far with the slow build up and this has the potential to be a great series. but as a fan I would ask that you do not break them up and when they do have sex for the first time then it should happen where it all started.....in a cabin.lol

loved both of them...next part please?! : D

Great start. Now get that next chapter done and don't keep us hanging!! Are you done yet?

i must say, i've read alot of storries on this site.. And haven't read one that has been written as good as this.. Keep up the good work. And don't rush.. Perfection takes time right..

I'm an author as well. I just hope my work is anywhere close to this calibre. This is amazing!!!

Keep up the good work.

one of the best storys on the site, emotional and real.

I loved the story and read it through several times. I just hope other doesn't take another 9 months for the next chapter but I understand if it does. We all have real life to worry about.

I love it, it's a really good story.

Wicked story, plz hurry on the next one. This is turnin out to be a awesome romance

I have literally read hundreds of stories here and this was far and away the best one. Please, please continue the saga.

Great story man.... Cant wait for the next one

I love the series cant wait for the next story

when i see only one or two HONEST comments and 90% rave reviews i know the writer has friends and relatives pading the comments area and paying other writers for raves as well. this story was ok but far from deserving a rave review.

your public needs to know what happens next

i thought the story is fantastic hope u continue it soon

Ok first off I love this story just for the story itself I'm an avid reader and I have this thing for when I find a really good story I can't put it down until I've reached the end you sir are a phenomenal writer in that you have love and lust as well as a supremely wonderful story I cannot wait to see what you have in store for Scarlett and Chris and can only pray that it is a happy ending cheers to you sir for this fantastic story

Aww your killing me ending the chapter there and not having the next one posted!

Plz make part 3

This is one of the best stories I've read here so far so part 3 would be highly appriciated ;)

Great build up, I'm hoping to see more.

Please u r still there please write more about Scarlett and Chris

I hope you don't leave all your readers hanging. Really needs more chapters!

Well written and fun, but incomplete.

Thank you all for your wonderful response to the story. I haven't been able to write in a very long time and i'm sorry. My health has been pretty rotten lately and whenever my bipolar acts up badly it affects my writing terribly. I promise as soon as I'm able to I'll continue Scarlett and Chris' story, they've grown to be my favourite characters and I want to see where they go just as much as you do, Believe me!

Thanks again and I'll keep you all posted

C

This is without a doubt the best story that has graced literotica in years. Loving the development of Chris and Scarlett, especially Scarlett as we get to watch her morph from a bitch into an amazing woman. Would love if the parents and friends got developed a bit more, but that's a very minor complaint. Also loving how this a story about soulmates and not just another generic brother and sister fuckfest.

Keep up the amazing work and writing, because your my new all-time favorite author here on literotica.

totally outstanding job

but the story didn't need Adrian.

There is enough tension and slow simmer between the two of them as they grow together without having to bring in a whole new back story creating unnecessary turmoil.

almost a year now and im still checking/waiting for ch3!

sry.. didnt see that note about your health :(

This is without a doubt the best story that has graced literotica in years. Loving the development of Chris and Scarlett, especially Scarlett..

Keep up the amazing work and writing, because your my new favorite author here on literotica.

I can't wait wish to read more.

I hope you're health improve...

This is the best story I've read in Literotica. I keep rereading it over and over. I hope you get well so you can finish the story.

I loved the first story, and this one as well. I look forward to Chapter 3.

Any update on the next chapter? Hope your health improves.

Please take care of yourself, and get yourself healthy, THEN, worry about finishing this amazing, heartwarming story

Be well:-)

I loved this story, one of the best I've read. Can't wait for the 3rd part

This is the best story I have read, ever. The first chapter was absolutely amazing and I honestly didn't think part 2 could beat it, then you went and blew me away. I love the build up and how these two genuinely love each other. Extremely well written, absolutely can not wait for a part 3. Thank you, thank you, thank you xox

I love this story to the core. You've described the love very sweetly. The couple is cute and I hope the third part comes soon. I've been waiting for the third part for a long time. Keep on writing.

This is the best story I ave ever seen on literotica.....................hope u complete it soon...................wish u fast recovery on ur health.......

Pls complete this story...........................love your writing ability

this is love in the finest example of the word !!

I have never left a comment to a story before. This was phenomenal to read and total unexpected. Please post more, this was just amazing.

please man complete this story as quickly as you can. I t is a great story

Please complete this series.You can make many chapters. The love in this story touches my hurt. So please post chapter 3 as quickly as possible

Both chapters have been phenomenal and captivating in every way. Thank you i can't wait to read more

Great story hoping for another chapter.

wow .. just wow .First comment .The best story ive read on this site.

3 thumbs up from me!

i just log in this site in order to comment on this particular story ,awesome story eagerly waiting for next part .

More !!! I need more!!

Please need more kinda left us hanging

Love this story,,,please finish this story, we need one more chapter....

Please finish

Please finish

Please finish!!!

Best storie I've read plz don't let it end like this

Hope ur health enables you to write more soon wish u we'll ty for a great story

I love this series. I have read it 13 times now and love more every time. I can't wait for the next part. I hope you can finish it soon.

Please finish this story

Continue with this. We all await to hear more.

Thanks. Bows to you for keeping real true love alive.

Uhhhhhhh why the bloody hell why does it take so long to finish these stories it's so annoying.Spend hours reading a great story only to be left cold.Insulting your readers by wasting their time committing to a story only to be let down.

I've been with my sister since I was 18 and we both love these stories but need them to finish properly.

I do hope you have a good ending for these two as they have been thru enough hell and should end up together like that elderly couple. Please write an ending for this. Good I hope!!

Please finish this story, can't wait to read the rest

seems this writer is just another loser that can't finish what they start and doesn't have enough brains to stay on their medication.

We liked it and would love to read more. Please disregard the anonymous jerk who called you a loser. We are sure they never wrote anything so they never experienced writers block with a story.

This is a warm and wonderful story very well told. Please continue this story as so many of us have come to enjoy all of your characters.

I am so proud of Anonymous for announcing that he is "Just Another Loser." It is so rare to find this kind of honesty from a mindless dolt.

This needs to continue....i think its a great story...

please finish this with love.....

Please finish it. This can go in so many directions, it should be interesting to see which way you go with it.

You've done a good job of developing the characters.

What really fucking pisses me off is that people who write these fucking stories completely waste my time and the effort put into reading a story only to find that despite promising to complete cannot be bothered to do so.I would not have wasted my time if I knew this was going to happen.Fucking waste of my time.

I hope ur health is improving so u can continue with the story. Ones health is so more important. Hating patiently on ur return.

I'm truly sorry that I haven't been able to finish my stories. Some people have said some very cruel things about me and I really feel sorry for them and hope that they never have to deal with what I have over the past three years since my last publish.

For those of you who have expressed your appreciation and compassion I thank you from the bottom of my heart. It kills me that I can't write at this time and I feel like I've failed you all in this.

Thank you all and be well.

Chi

The story that you have written is amazing! I am deeply sorry to hear about your health situation, I wish you a speedy recovery. When, not if, you get better I do hope that a part 3 will be in the future but at the is present time I really do hope you get well! Take care of yourself and I wish you all the best

Sincerely avid reader.

This was a great love story. It brought me tp tears. If you ever can finish it it would be wonderful and we'll.worth the wait.

What a very well written and cleverly thought out plot.This rates as one of the very best on the web let alone Literotica site.Yes it would be nice if it was finished but actually as it is its left to the imagination what would happen.

My wife is also my sister but we never met until I was 16 and she 14.my dad took me when he left my mom and went back to England.When he died my mom told me she was my stepmom and my real mom was in the USA.I read a story by breachbum1958 that was very close to my real life story but my life did not have so much drama.When we met we fell for each other and were immediately inserperable.Setup together when she was 23.and are very happy we have two daughters.Its why we both love these stories.Thanks for your stories and I hope sincerely that whatever is wrong is resolved and you are OK really.

This was one of the first stories to get me hooked into Literotica.....please, pretty please with a hamburger on top....continue.