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by SashaSOGood
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Anonymousover 9 years agoNice story but wrong words
Like the storyline but several items make it difficult to read. You tend toward run on sentences (punctuation, please), you have trouble with verb tenses (I did, too, early on), and you regularly insert incorrect words (no adverb where there should be one, imminent not emanate, fell swoop not foul swoop, their not there).
Could use an editor but your story is engaging.
Anonymousalmost 13 years agohaha ;) I like you already
my name is Sasha too. meanwhile keep it up! <3
somethingsamissabout 13 years agolol assface
now longer chapters i cant get enough of any of your stories
Mermaid2189about 13 years agoyay!!! been wondering if u was going too update this story plz dont take soo long for the next chapter plz
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