Jessa Ch. 02

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Chimera44
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Time passed. She was aware of his cock, pulsing inside her, swelling, eager. He was aware of her quickening breath, the hot flesh sheathing his cock, the flood of moisture bathing him inside and out. As one, they began moving, meeting each other, then teasingly pulling away. He could feel the flexing of her hips against his belly, constantly changing the angle of his cock inside her. One of his hands slid down her belly, slowly, tantalizingly seeking out her clit. His other hand sought a breast, cupping, squeezing gently, then slid ever so slowly up to her throat, pulling her back so his lips could reach her shoulder, his teeth could nip. He let her continue to set the pace, exploring the sensation of his cock inside her. His fingers massaged the sides of her clit, slowly increasing the pressure until her movements became more erratic. His free arm moved down to her waist and pulled her hard against him as he took over the rhythm, matching his thrusts inside her to those of his fingers against her clit until she was crying out, more softly this time than in the past. He felt her tremble after, perhaps realizing she had been betrayed yet again by her own body and its needs and desires. He held her tightly until the trembling faded away.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

whats so special about her

he needs kids he can have with any women

why her ?

i am sure many women were ovulating there on the trip other than her

or torah wants amazonian babies like her i mean is it due to her genetics he chose her out of all woman

or he is baffled that she wasnt clingy like other girls ?he likes her for her aloofness?

he wants to break her into liking him as he saw her totally uninterested in him along with all men out there as she would go alone to her every n8

does he like her due to her reluctance to marriage and finds fun in forcing her into marital life

she might be the only girl giving him some fight or excites him

or is it that she was the tallest girl there ?

torah into tall women only?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Aftercare

"He held her tightly until the trembling faded away."

So important. And so many people miss it. Superb writing, thank you.

You want to dominate someone? You want to bend someone to your will? It doesn't happen when you force yourself on them, it doesn't happen when you control them with your power - it happens during aftercare. When they're trembling and they need to be held. That's when you win. That's when you prove yourself worthy of their submission.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
WTF!

How could he be so damn charming for the days he spent pulling her like a spider into his web and then be such a cold vindictive little shit! If he wants more than just a baby maker then he best start showing some more of warmth and consideration he showed in the beginning and stop being such an ass.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
"She was a smart girl, she could learn anything."

LOL ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

I wouldn't call her smart, but she seems pretty good at reassuring herself.

I liked the first chapter but this one felt contrived. Like you wanted to model it after some of the more popular stories in this category by making your characters more similar to other commonly liked protagonists. It's not a bad thing to do, but it just doesn't seem to match how the story was written in the beginning.

Besides that, the writing is quite nice and the subtle revelations that the story takes place in a post-pandemic version of our Earth is a nice touch. However, it was a bit strange how they referred to their home countries as "what used to be known as Germany/France". If there are names for what 'they used to be called', do these lands not have newer, more updated names?

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Wow

Another great chapter. I'm so excited to read more!!!!

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