All Comments on 'Jillian Ch. 01'

Well written, great pace and fantastic story-line. I almost came in my pants while reading this at work!!! I can't wait for chapter 2.

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Just one small error I saw when reading, you state that she sent just a topless picture but he then replies about both her tits and her trimmed bush.

Other that this minor detail very good story.

Please write Part 2, it sounds so fun !

The most confusing story I have ever read. Other people obviously understood it, so it was probably just me.

That was so different, I really liked it !!

Please write more incest themed stories thou,you have a knack for 'em....5stars for this one btw as if you didn't know already