All Comments on 'Jillian Ch. 01'

by chloejacobs83

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Familyluv2114uFamilyluv2114uover 4 years ago
Loved it!

Please write more incest themed stories thou,you have a knack for 'em....5stars for this one btw as if you didn't know already

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Wow

That was so different, I really liked it !!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Confusing

The most confusing story I have ever read. Other people obviously understood it, so it was probably just me.

jaqvertjaqvertover 12 years ago
Where's part 2 ?

Please write Part 2, it sounds so fun !

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
great

Just one small error I saw when reading, you state that she sent just a topless picture but he then replies about both her tits and her trimmed bush.

Other that this minor detail very good story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Incredible!!

Well written, great pace and fantastic story-line. I almost came in my pants while reading this at work!!! I can't wait for chapter 2.

Happy

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