All Comments on 'Look...Then Touch'

why not walk in the first time what could good ole vaughn say no you cant fuck my wife ... shit with hiscock in yours he would have to agree ...or if it ws me id kick his ass and fuck her anyway

the volunteer editor program. This could be improved with a good editors help (plus it's very educational!)

Not bad writing. but somewhat campy. It needs some sort of tension to add interest. Like pretending you're really pissed even if you are not. Think of the leverage that gives you!

Still a story about a cheating wife

Very good! And it's your first story?

sorry weak men and whores for wives not get it.

HELLO!? Your wife is a slut. Now you know. All that's left is to get the divorce. You want to go fuck her after she's had sex with both Vaughn and Ariel? Who the hell knows where those two have had their dick and cunt. You really want to expose yourself to that? I don't think so!

Don't write anymore because you really suck!

gave it a 5

Ahhhhhhhh...he arrived and had 2 freshly fucked women...full of sperm of another man for him to lick...That's what happened...And he was happy for it...He didn't have any self-respect...And his wife still said she did love him? 1*

Next time please publish where it belongs.

can I give it a -1?

And if you don't like the content thats fine, then differentiate between their ability and the content and why you scored it the way you did.

The site always needs new writers for new content.

Puerile.

Don't bother with another day.

Offal, and that's not misspelled.

Good Job, my Friend. 5 big Blazing stars. Good Writing, Good Story, Fun to read. LOL I really enjoyed this read actually. More please. Thanks, Buster2U