by TheMav1eric2
Good Job, my Friend. 5 big Blazing stars. Good Writing, Good Story, Fun to read. LOL I really enjoyed this read actually. More please. Thanks, Buster2U
And if you don't like the content thats fine, then differentiate between their ability and the content and why you scored it the way you did.
The site always needs new writers for new content.
Ahhhhhhhh...he arrived and had 2 freshly fucked women...full of sperm of another man for him to lick...That's what happened...And he was happy for it...He didn't have any self-respect...And his wife still said she did love him? 1*
gave it a 5
HELLO!? Your wife is a slut. Now you know. All that's left is to get the divorce. You want to go fuck her after she's had sex with both Vaughn and Ariel? Who the hell knows where those two have had their dick and cunt. You really want to expose yourself to that? I don't think so!
the volunteer editor program. This could be improved with a good editors help (plus it's very educational!)
Not bad writing. but somewhat campy. It needs some sort of tension to add interest. Like pretending you're really pissed even if you are not. Think of the leverage that gives you!
why not walk in the first time what could good ole vaughn say no you cant fuck my wife ... shit with hiscock in yours he would have to agree ...or if it ws me id kick his ass and fuck her anyway