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Jackie made her way down the short trail to the lake by the university. It was tucked away in the local forest preserve, so not many students knew it was there, despite the pristine beach and cool clear water. It was the perfect place for a relaxing swim after the stress of midterms. As she stripped down to her bikini, though, she saw someone else in the water. She immediately felt herself moisten at the sight of the handsome, well-muscled man. But what was he doing way out there in the middle of the lake? And was that... a fish tail? No way, someone had to be playing a prank on her. But before she knew it she found herself wading out toward him, unhooking her bikini top and stepping out of the bottom.
Austin watched and grinned as the slender young woman started swimming toward them. Their cock hardened in anticipation. Yes, they were going to enjoy this new life.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 6 years agoGreat read, really captures what I enjoy in transformation erotica. Ignore the negative comments, they're too stupid to understand the ending. Would have been equally great with an ending where Shane had won and reverted everyone back to normal, or almost back to normal if you get me ;)
Anonymousover 6 years agoIt was very interesting, and as you said in the beginning, weird. I overall enjoyed it, but I kind of got lost.
Anonymousover 6 years agoWhy did nobody have any input as to what changes they wanted to keep. The story ended up with Jackie walking down the trail. Who the hell is Jackie? This was a new name introduced at the end with no explanation as to who she is. I thought the changes in the magic game was outrageous and could have been toned down a lot. I found myself starting to skim through the story rather than just reading it.
Anonymousover 6 years agoIt was a good read but you could have done better on the ending. Befor the last roll of the dice. Austin could have asked every body if they wanted to keep any of the changes or if they wanted to go back to normal. But instead you made the personality chang override his true self. That was a crapy choice. But other than a crapy ending it was as I said a good read.
