All Comments on 'Marion Turns Me On Ch. 01'

I relished your descriptions of all things feminine, from the hair, to the stockings, the earrings, the lipstick to the love of cock. Absoulutely beautiful story that I can relate to in all ways. I loved it. Keep writing and hopefully sucking cock for Marion.

Can't wait for chapter 2

What a hot story. And so beautifully written. You have brilliant and varied descriptive skills as a writer. I have something to aspire to. Thank you.

Wow. I wish it was me there in your place. Please keep writing !

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wwhat a turn on for me so hot i loved it and want more , i want to be there so bad yummmmm

can't wait to read the next one

Hot and beautifully written.

i just love these stories, it is so well written and turns me on.

Wow, That was A Beautiful Story. I LOVE I. I can relate to it I wish I had a person like Marion to help me, Explorer, my inner personality. As a Crossdresser. I can relate to the character. I loved wearing woman's clothes. And now wear it only it makes me feel ALIVE.

loved it. One question though. If this was under the heading, Part 6, what happened to parts One through five? Now I’m thinking maybe I should have begun reading your submissions in Chronological order.

I just caught on to Literotica about three years ago so some of what I’m reading is kinda old. It’s still just as relevant.

Just a fabulous low key and sensual start to a story that I’m sure is about to burst into erotic flames. Can’t wait to read the next chapter. Great writing, characters and premise and I so appreciate a long story I can sink my teeth into.