All Comments on 'Marion Turns Me On Ch. 01'

Just a fabulous low key and sensual start to a story that I’m sure is about to burst into erotic flames. Can’t wait to read the next chapter. Great writing, characters and premise and I so appreciate a long story I can sink my teeth into.

loved it. One question though. If this was under the heading, Part 6, what happened to parts One through five? Now I’m thinking maybe I should have begun reading your submissions in Chronological order.

I just caught on to Literotica about three years ago so some of what I’m reading is kinda old. It’s still just as relevant.

Wow, That was A Beautiful Story. I LOVE I. I can relate to it I wish I had a person like Marion to help me, Explorer, my inner personality. As a Crossdresser. I can relate to the character. I loved wearing woman's clothes. And now wear it only it makes me feel ALIVE.

i just love these stories, it is so well written and turns me on.

Hot and beautifully written.

can't wait to read the next one

wwhat a turn on for me so hot i loved it and want more , i want to be there so bad yummmmm

Wow. I wish it was me there in your place. Please keep writing !

B

What a hot story. And so beautifully written. You have brilliant and varied descriptive skills as a writer. I have something to aspire to. Thank you.

Can't wait for chapter 2

I relished your descriptions of all things feminine, from the hair, to the stockings, the earrings, the lipstick to the love of cock. Absoulutely beautiful story that I can relate to in all ways. I loved it. Keep writing and hopefully sucking cock for Marion.