All Comments on 'Melinda's Fishy Discharge Ch. 04'

You're writing about a subject you love, that's obvious; but, in this episode at least, the repetitiousness kills the story.

Perhaps developing the episode rather than simply writing a snapshot of a juicy twat would take you into scenes you could really sink your teeth into.

Overall though, great descriptive writing.

My friend yes Melinda has pussy smell that could turn on many like me . My girl Flourisha#4 too nas lovely pungent fishy pussy odour despite her regular shower . When we have vwry long & odourous weekend fucking session & both of us are sweaty & tired in hot humid Kolkotta weather I put both her beautiful legs on my shoulder & kiss het feet now the cheesy smell from Try outher toes sole feels my nostrils & make me to cum in waves . Try out with Melinda's feet next, you wont regret y friend .