by Paradiggler
My friend yes Melinda has pussy smell that could turn on many like me . My girl Flourisha#4 too nas lovely pungent fishy pussy odour despite her regular shower . When we have vwry long & odourous weekend fucking session & both of us are sweaty & tired in hot humid Kolkotta weather I put both her beautiful legs on my shoulder & kiss het feet now the cheesy smell from Try outher toes sole feels my nostrils & make me to cum in waves . Try out with Melinda's feet next, you wont regret y friend .
You're writing about a subject you love, that's obvious; but, in this episode at least, the repetitiousness kills the story.
Perhaps developing the episode rather than simply writing a snapshot of a juicy twat would take you into scenes you could really sink your teeth into.
Overall though, great descriptive writing.