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Click hereSuddenly finding herself looking into the bottomless dark pools of her loving Owner, smiling shyly a warm blush coloring her cheeks she quietly whispers a good morning.
Smiling back at Her little submissive, Vixen answers with a soft kiss. Snuggling closer She pulls Jewel into Her arms, laying quietly in the still early quietness of the house.
- COMMENTS
ktwk007about 14 years agoYou should clean up the spelling/punctuation errors - it distracts from the story. And Wow...what a story. This is super hot - and I love that you show the loving/caring relationship between subs and Dommes rather than making it all sex and whips. Very nicely done.
Firerocket67almost 15 years agoAmazingly well written, a true pleasure to read and revel in. I must say, the way you broke up the paragraphs made it so much easier to read and seperates it from a lot of stories on here. You used amazing detail and discription. I especially liked how you used the Mistress as a balm to the harshness of the Master with Jewel. Please write a follow up.
Sir_Nathanover 19 years agoAnd some is excellent. It is also a very good example of a story that would be extraordinary if it were well edited. Have patience. The results are worthwhile.
Anonymousover 19 years agoI liked this story for many reasons. The writer is abmitious and clearly enjoys the telling of the tale. After reading the author's profile it was obvious the sincerity and warmth in this story are genuine. The details are rich and comforting, and the sensual elements are realistic and made tangible with careful wording. I hope you write more honey.
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