All Comments on 'Moondust Hollow Ch. 01: Arrival'

Great story so far, please do go on. As far as constructive criticism: longer chapters please.

I've never been big on "cliffhangers." There is a natural place to and erotic stories. There is a line between leaving your reader wanting more and disappointing them because you didn't give enough.

This is a great story! Keep on writing.

This story is great as far as it went. Please write more and don't make us wait too long..