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gentleone58about 6 years agoMore Too
This story is great as far as it went. Please write more and don't make us wait too long..
Anonymousover 6 years agoGood beginning but the ending is abrupt
I've never been big on "cliffhangers." There is a natural place to and erotic stories. There is a line between leaving your reader wanting more and disappointing them because you didn't give enough.
Anonymousover 6 years agoGo on...
Great story so far, please do go on. As far as constructive criticism: longer chapters please.
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