All Comments on 'My Mother, The Stripper Pt. 03'

making sure that Raye and Janie have a supply of condoms for their stripper job. He wants to make sure the girls are ready to maximize their tips, such a nice husband and step-father. Raye needs to remember to use them, but hey the tips are better bareback.

Nice story.

Keep writing, your ideas are pretty good fun.

Try taking an evening class in writing. One that has as much homework as possible.I can tell you one thing very quickly: you use too many commas.

Nice storey, enjoying it, looking forward to more. But oh dear the grammar and spelling is bad, take a class as suggested below, but don’t give up the bones of your storeys are great. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️