by raiderdrm
Nice storey, enjoying it, looking forward to more. But oh dear the grammar and spelling is bad, take a class as suggested below, but don’t give up the bones of your storeys are great. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Try taking an evening class in writing. One that has as much homework as possible.I can tell you one thing very quickly: you use too many commas.
making sure that Raye and Janie have a supply of condoms for their stripper job. He wants to make sure the girls are ready to maximize their tips, such a nice husband and step-father. Raye needs to remember to use them, but hey the tips are better bareback.
Nice story.