by redlily90
I think this will be a good story if the chapters are a lot longer than this one. It just started and it was over.
Please continue, thanks
this has potential but i have to agree just when i was getting into it the story just ended.
no plot, no background, not believable or realistic and so short it would dissapear if you removed one paragraph. if you can't be bothered to write a decent length story don't post at all.
I would like to read the end, or is there one, does it have to end? I love it I voted 5 on it
my email is wdenny 55@yahoo.com.
i agree with DELETE this sucked from the start. the 40D tits and 10" cock ruined the story and made it a waste of time trying to read it.