by redlily90
i agree with DELETE this sucked from the start. the 40D tits and 10" cock ruined the story and made it a waste of time trying to read it.
I would like to read the end, or is there one, does it have to end? I love it I voted 5 on it
my email is wdenny 55@yahoo.com.
no plot, no background, not believable or realistic and so short it would dissapear if you removed one paragraph. if you can't be bothered to write a decent length story don't post at all.
this has potential but i have to agree just when i was getting into it the story just ended.
I think this will be a good story if the chapters are a lot longer than this one. It just started and it was over.
Please continue, thanks