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"You're scaring me. Sarah."
"There's nothing to be scared of. My past will always be there, I accept that. It'll shove its way into my life from time to time, it can't be helped. That doesn't mean I have to let my past taint you."
Laura knew Sarah was trying hard to keep it together but her refusal to leave increased Sarah's agitation. If Frank got physical Laura couldn't stop him. In fact her presence might escalate things and put Sarah in even more danger.
"I'm going." Laura pulled Sarah to her feet. "I'm scared for you, if anything happened because I walked away . . . "
"Nothing will happen." Sarah's color returned a little.
"You have to call me as soon as he leaves."
Sarah nodded fast, like a child trying to be extra honest.
"I'm going to be scared to death until I hear your voice again."
Sarah helped Laura to her car with all her stuff. Just before Laura climbed in Sarah stopped her.
"Don't worry. Frank has never raised a hand to me." Sarah pulled Laura into a hug and kissed her with all the tender passion Laura hoped for. If only it hadn't felt like a kiss goodby.
- COMMENTS
Thors_Fistalmost 4 years agoI'm enjoying the story, plot, characters, but you have some really basic spelling or grammar errors, which should have been corrected by the second chapter. It should be bored (verb for tedious), not board (noun for a piece of wood). You talk about cloths (material), instead of clothes (garments). It takes away from what could be a five star submission. You're up to Chapter 9 in submissions, and I hope you've sought help of editor or proof reader, because this could be a wonderful story if I weren't getting jarred by the errors which are like slaps in the face when I read one. It's good enough, I want to continue reading, just wish it were better.
LsMom6over 11 years agoLaura and Sarah are such relatable characters because each of them have fears, insecurities, painful experiences and desires; which are familar to all of us. The sex is scorching hot; and the suspense leaves me jonesing for the next chapter. The only downfall is having to wait for the next fix!
