by LilJacks
Unbelievable! Too sudden. Needs more build up. More details of the forest/vines. Magic? Fetrilizer? Experiment?
Needs more questions answered. To be attacked by nature and then not be freaked out and decide to stay till morning. To many unanswered questions.
This was honestly a poorly detailed parody of The Evil Dead and I'm still confused how the guy came 6+ times, yet the girl only came once. Pretty sure it's easier to make a girl cum with her g spot, compared to a guy with his prostate and how come the guy wasn't aware of his family's cabin having rapist branches? The more you think about this story, the more it falls apart.