by LilJacks
This was honestly a poorly detailed parody of The Evil Dead and I'm still confused how the guy came 6+ times, yet the girl only came once. Pretty sure it's easier to make a girl cum with her g spot, compared to a guy with his prostate and how come the guy wasn't aware of his family's cabin having rapist branches? The more you think about this story, the more it falls apart.
Needs more questions answered. To be attacked by nature and then not be freaked out and decide to stay till morning. To many unanswered questions.
Unbelievable! Too sudden. Needs more build up. More details of the forest/vines. Magic? Fetrilizer? Experiment?