All Comments on 'Neighbors'

... for such a short one. Everything necessary was laid out for the reader to discover, Wonder, angst, lust and devotion.

5/5

This was, without question, the most erotic story I've read on this site ever. It was perfect. Thank you.

Been dealing with ongoing relationship pain and needed a “Happily Ever After”. This story was a good one. Thank you.

Thanks for the kind words, everyone. I'm glad you liked the story.

This is the first of your stories that I’ve read. Rest assured I’ll be reading more! You proved that there is only so much detail actually necessary, if the story is well written. All the elements that were “necessary” were there to be fleshed out by imagination. Very, very god job!!

With likable characters who both know what they want. Here's to all the joy their lives can hold.... and then let it spill over so others (like the 'pissed off' parents) can share it with them.

Very nice job, thanks!

Extremely well written, looking forward to reading more of your stories.

Well written story and very entertaining. Thanks for sharing.

Also, Khaleesi of the Great Ass Sea is a movie I would love to see 😁

I read your earlier postings and, while they were enjoyable, they just aren't a match for this effort. This is a concise and well-written love story with believable characters and excellent dialogue. Keep up the great work!

Folks,

Thanks for all of the kind feedback. I appreciate it.

A thoroughly enjoyable and sweet love story. Thanks for the telling.

...perfectly told. 'Nuff said.

Hasn’t anyone heard of the morning after pill in these stories?

Thanks for the kind feedback, folks.

In this story, neither Zoey nor Rob wanted to avoid a pregnancy in the end, so they knew about Plan B and the like but didn't want it.

In a more general sense, my stories often end up with a pregnancy or two because I find it exciting.

But what was Zoey's job exactly? Why did she travel so much?

Zoey is a journalist for some sort of travel magazine. I sort of hint at it but don't spell it out.

This story! Fantastic, Thanks

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.

Too short, alas, but hot and sweet. 5 stars.

NewOldGuy77,

I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Don't know why his parents didn't like her, but they'd better get used to her. She is, or will be their son's wife, love of his life, and mother to his child she's carrying and all future children. WONDERFUL STORY!!

Anon,

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. And you're right - Zoey is a lovely person and she and Rob are sticking together, so his parents should get used to it. It might take them a while, though.

Sweet.

Anon,

Aww. Thanks!

Wonderful story. It's kind of a mystery why his parents don't like her.

Maybe his parents see he more than likes her, and she isn't in their plan for him.

They just don't care. Nice.

Big_Tim99,

It felt to me like Rob's parents were a bit traditionalist and a bit snobby, so the woman next door who travels all over writing magazine articles and hangs out with their son telling cool stories was always a bit alien to them. I think they'll grow past it eventually, though.

Big_Tim99,

Also, I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Thanks for reading!

Yes

Anon,

Thanks!

Sweet, just wish there was more of the story. I always want more of the good stories.

Mrfriendly8181,

I'm glad you thought it was a good one; thank you. I do write sequels or additional chapters for some stories, but since I write pretty slowly I try not to promise too many of them.

Loved it. It is sweet and funny. I wouldn’t be opposed to a continuation, but is really good as is.

Rbloch66,

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. I sometimes write follow-up stories but I think that the characters' happy trajectory is pretty clear.

I love the little hints to background without feeling the need to walk us through their lives from birth until sex. Their relationship felt lovely and real and hot. The scene, and the impregnation fetish were hot. Nicely done. 5*

Shadracht,

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it - I enjoyed learning more about these two as I wrote.