by bumpercars
Niceguy2000,
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.
I could have written more, but I feel like not every question needs an explicit answer.
A classic.
Sweet, warm, loving...with a rare bit of humour.
Well done.
I appreciate that you were trying for a minimalist approach, not having to spell everything out...but it would have been easy (and fairly economical word-wise) to give a bit more of their history together, to establish a relationship before they decide to make a baby.
Shadracht,
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it - I enjoyed learning more about these two as I wrote.
I love the little hints to background without feeling the need to walk us through their lives from birth until sex. Their relationship felt lovely and real and hot. The scene, and the impregnation fetish were hot. Nicely done. 5*
Rbloch66,
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. I sometimes write follow-up stories but I think that the characters' happy trajectory is pretty clear.
Loved it. It is sweet and funny. I wouldn’t be opposed to a continuation, but is really good as is.
Mrfriendly8181,
I'm glad you thought it was a good one; thank you. I do write sequels or additional chapters for some stories, but since I write pretty slowly I try not to promise too many of them.
Sweet, just wish there was more of the story. I always want more of the good stories.
Big_Tim99,
Also, I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Thanks for reading!
Big_Tim99,
It felt to me like Rob's parents were a bit traditionalist and a bit snobby, so the woman next door who travels all over writing magazine articles and hangs out with their son telling cool stories was always a bit alien to them. I think they'll grow past it eventually, though.
Wonderful story. It's kind of a mystery why his parents don't like her.
Maybe his parents see he more than likes her, and she isn't in their plan for him.
They just don't care. Nice.
Anon,
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. And you're right - Zoey is a lovely person and she and Rob are sticking together, so his parents should get used to it. It might take them a while, though.
Don't know why his parents didn't like her, but they'd better get used to her. She is, or will be their son's wife, love of his life, and mother to his child she's carrying and all future children. WONDERFUL STORY!!
Zoey is a journalist for some sort of travel magazine. I sort of hint at it but don't spell it out.
In this story, neither Zoey nor Rob wanted to avoid a pregnancy in the end, so they knew about Plan B and the like but didn't want it.
In a more general sense, my stories often end up with a pregnancy or two because I find it exciting.
A thoroughly enjoyable and sweet love story. Thanks for the telling.
I read your earlier postings and, while they were enjoyable, they just aren't a match for this effort. This is a concise and well-written love story with believable characters and excellent dialogue. Keep up the great work!
Also, Khaleesi of the Great Ass Sea is a movie I would love to see 😁
Extremely well written, looking forward to reading more of your stories.
With likable characters who both know what they want. Here's to all the joy their lives can hold.... and then let it spill over so others (like the 'pissed off' parents) can share it with them.
Very nice job, thanks!
This is the first of your stories that I’ve read. Rest assured I’ll be reading more! You proved that there is only so much detail actually necessary, if the story is well written. All the elements that were “necessary” were there to be fleshed out by imagination. Very, very god job!!
Thanks for the kind words, everyone. I'm glad you liked the story.
Been dealing with ongoing relationship pain and needed a “Happily Ever After”. This story was a good one. Thank you.
This was, without question, the most erotic story I've read on this site ever. It was perfect. Thank you.
... for such a short one. Everything necessary was laid out for the reader to discover, Wonder, angst, lust and devotion.
5/5