All Comments on 'Nightmare'

I really enjoyed being a little lost (much like Riley) at the start!

Only suggestion would be more backstory/build-up; how long have they known each other, he been lusting after her? What about that first meeting with her turned him on? What makes him want her so badly/over his wife? Why NOW? You’re a skilled story weaver, so I know you could easily add that info in a line here, a couple there...

I’d love to hear her “tell all about it” and hear how easily he soothes her fears/embarrassment over the phone, all the while reliving the imagery she’s relaying (pleasuring himself maybe?) and finally, whether it really happened!

Five stars!

Interesting premise, however, the grammatical errors were distracting. Could benefit from an editor.

Nine months later and the baby daddy is in jail