All Comments on 'No Reply - Husbands' Response'

Didn't care for the original and this one wasn't any better.

Still a cuck tale untagged at least have the courage to tag your story, it’s good manners here on Lit.

Scores 1/5

Crap.

Interesting fantasy. This author is a woman, as they typically expect their actions are acceptable (they “control the pussy”) and thus the somewhat happy ending. Problem is Men tend to give everything into their love for their wives. The betrayal is crushing to men. Forgiveness (if remotely possible) takes forever.

Additional thought: If the sexes were somehow reversed (men teaching young women), it would be viewed as fantasy and “not plausible”

How do you figure they regained there respect and dignity they let there wives fuck around on them they didn't regain their respect and dignity they lost all respect not just from there wives but from everyone else in the world including kids they can never regain that the husbands and the wives all deserve to die the husbands should kill themselves now cause there not going to like life now there going to get disrespected at every turn from everyone and then there going to get there ass beat by every MAN out there at every turn ask any willing cuck bitch out there they will tell you nobody not even kids respect them that they get there ass beat every time they leave the house they have to live like a recluse for being a willing cuck bitch which is why in real life you hardly ever hear about willing cuck bitches cause they know they will disrespected by everyone and get there ass kicked at every turn and not even the law will do anything to help them that's the price you pay for being something that god did not create man to be that's assuming they even survive most willing cuck bitches wouldn't survive they would be killed like they deserve and the cheating sluts would also be killed like they deserve

Simply terrible.

Nice spin!! You nearly pulled it off. Many nice words and pleasantries for everyone but the victims. Everyone has their own reality and no one should ever think that others would accept or rejoice in their personal reality or hell as the case may be. Sometimes it’s better to be a widower rather than a Divorcee

Not a bad alternative. Comes off as less betrayal than in GA alternative where her reasons are different. To be fair the MC here brings up a good point. She did ask him and he did not reply. Still rough, but not as harsh as GA versions, where she would have done it anyways and she said some things that would effectively kill the marriage. 4 stars as I doubt the other marriages would suddenly heal because trees were removed after so many years of pain.

Have read a bunch of no reply it amazes me how easy the women get off

Not much! No honour anywhere in this story. Strident cunts and wimps.

This was a big no-no. Telling us we have to find somebody else's story without a link. Another way you can do it is to start with a summary. For that reason I am not bothering with your story. I am tempted to score it one star, but that would be wrong. No read, no score.

Try to learn from this.

JPB

This is my second comment on this and I'm going to address the tag line of the story a man can never regain respect when he knew and let his wife fuck another man no man would ever respect him and no woman would either he completely lost all respect it can never be earned again even kids will show him disrespect now he killed every credibility he ever had when he allowed her to fuck another man even when she told him what she was going to do he allowed her to do it and get away with it he just became 1 of the lowest scums on earth not the lowest the scum on earth that title belongs to child molesters but the 2nd lowest scum on earth belongs to a true cuckold those that allow and or let there wife get away with cheating which is what this husband is a true cuckold the 2nd lowest scum on earth he needs to go prison where those in for life make him there bitch like the bitch he is then they would kill him cause inmates don't take kindly to child molesters and cuck bitches which is why those types of people never survive not in prison nor in life so not only did the husband just lose all respect from everyone including kids they signed there own death warrant and when a writer writes stories like this they lose a lot of respect not all but a lot cause it shows they would more than likely allow there wife to get away with cheating on them and you can't trust nor respect someone that would allow that just like you can't trust nor respect someone who would cheat

Wow!! I liked it!!

Interesting ordeal some would say he is a better man others would say he is cuck bitch/coward I fall under the later she would have been out the door and I would have completely disowned everyone that was a part of it and would have beat the shit out of the guy

Sorry to say that, this is a piece of crap story about a bunch of cheating piece of crap women and the punk ass guys that stayed with their betraying, slut asses ...

It's not enough that you're a cuck, you're a liar as well!

Where's the dignity in being cucked and a knowing cuckold? Where's the dignity in being with a slutwife? Where's the respect in getting sloppy seconds?

"I'm sorry, so sorry that I pushed the decision onto you when I already knew the right thing to do. I think that that's why I'm so disappointed in myself." - Yep!

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"a bunch of well-pleased women who have something they can use to control their men." - I don't see how they can use it to control their men. I'd think it's the opposite, that the husbands can hold their wives cheating over their heads.

what are the odds that an add on to a shit story.. was it self a shit story...

Agree wholeheartedly with the Anonymous comment from 3 months ago starting with "This is way better than George Anderson's alternative version...". A long but well written critique comparing this story (which should be rated higher) and George Anderson's No Reply: Answered. The base story by HDK is a hard one to make work given how outlandish the base story is with husbands who know but unlike Bill, do nothing about it for three generations. Anyways I agree with the Anonymous commenter referred to at the start of this post, that this Debbie is far superior and for her reconciliation is warranted. The other Debbie on George Anderson's story is a cheating bitch. No need to recapitulate what is laid out in the critique below but what the GA Debbie does and says is just hurtful and clearly she planned for a long time to cuckold her husband, thoroughly enjoyed it and was probably looking for a repeat with Jeff Burrows" you ger brother in 18 months. The GA Debbie's rationalizations were tawdry and disrespectful, she clearly enjoyed the sex with the young stud, talking about his shirt refractory period, the constant fucking (even though she contends her husband is a much better lover), and got off on the power trip and the illicit thrill, admitting she was going to go behind his back if he said no. Umm fuck that. Of course GA uses the Amy / flower bed scheme as a deus ex machina, so Debbie comes to feel.his pain and they move on with their marriage. In real life, regardless of the Amy trick, that GA Debbie either gets kicked to the curb or their marriage will never be the same, regardless of how GA ended it. But this Debbie is different. She did not know until the funeral and met the.MIL and Janice and Jeff. She did not know about her son Jason and his cuckolding week. She got sucked into the tradition bullshit and paying forward her "gift" from Janice. This Debbie is remorseful almost immediately after Jeff leaves and probably was during the week, though tellingly not enough to stop once she had started the mentoring sessions, which were described as a few hours during the week, not the implied raging and frequent fuckfest in GA's variant ending. Also this Debbie gave her husband a chance by letting him know ahead of time (unlike other women) and offering him the chance to veto it and actually would have assented to his wishes. Because he felt blindsided and guilty over his time with Janice, he hesitated and couldn't express it and she took it as approval. That sucks and she should have known better but it is forgivable. Again thenfact that she gave him an actual choice, was significant. Remember she gave him a week, though the phone call was right before, probably because she didn't have the guts to do it in person, being a coward. But GA Debbie planned it as an ambush and admitted if he had said "no", she would have done it behind his back soon thereafter anyways, despite having to know if found out, which Bill would have, that their marriage would die. There are other differences based on how they react, their differences in demeanor and attitude when Bill comes back, how this Debbie just wants to apologize and make up for what she did and save their marriage, while the GA Debbie wants him to just get over his male.ego, accept that he got cuckolded and then ends up repeatedly hurting him when they argue. After the initial confrontation and then reclaim fuckfest of HDK, she apologizes, begs him to make love to her, and then offers anything to support his healing, helping him with his mother, Janice and young Jeff. But GA Debbie, who is probably only feeling guilty AFTER she sees her marriage in trouble, focuses on sniping and causing him pain and telling him to just suck it up, until she gets the wind taken out if her completely when he rigs the Amy / flower bed stunt. GA Debbie was a piece of work and no better than many of the other cheating slut wives on this site. The tradition was her cover to have an affair and maybe have another until her husband disabled her of that notion and they came perilously close to divorce. This Debbie is nothing like that and can and should be forgiven and the reconciliation is indeed warranted and the emphasis is on Bill's relationship with his mother the schemer who has injured or killed multiple marriages. Those women who refused to remove the trees are loathsome in that they fixate on the memory of their week long trysts with the young studs. In some ways no better than Linda from February Sucks who waxes fondly and lustfully about her one night tryst with Marc the asshole because the sex was do cosmic. Not sure that cheating wives realize how hurtful their praise or extolling the pleasures of their extramarital sex is to a husband. If there is no video or audio evidence then even if the sex was rocking, maybe in part due to the illicit thrill sex multiplier, they need to lie their ass off if they hope to stay married. If they don't, good fucking luck. That is a fact. And even if caught on tape depending on what happened and circumstances, they should still aim to soft sell the sexual pleasure because it is a big fucking deal to a husband. There was none of that with this Debbie and no need for her to lie. She was honest and there was no threat to the Bill sexually. GA Debbie just wants to score points in their arguments, has no problem.hurtijg her husband, and even if honest that her husband is a much better lover but the week met all her expectations (including fucking Jeff that next morning and afternoon after it was supposed to be over, meaning 8 days) because she enjoyed the youthful vigor and stamina and high frequency fucking, she just has to open her big fat mouth and get digs in on her husband, pushing their marriage to the brink. Maybe for someone who is a cheating slut, yet feels guilt on the inside and cannot bring herself to apologize till the Amy incident, that isnwhynshe lashes out but that just means GA Debbie is really stupid when emotional.

Whores that deserved burning is what they were.

Reflection of real life. Far too many fatherless boys in female led households. Hell, all most boys see until age sis teen or more is female authority, single mom, 85%female teachers, 70%female guidance counselors and so on. So society gets what it makes, increasing numbers of submissive males, wiling cucks are on the rise, and much more. And for the anon two comments down, your comments are correct, because GA is on record as stating that women should be for given and allowed to do WHATEVER THEY WANT, no matter how egregious, because, well, that is the way it should work. The stories by that pretend writer reflect that attitude and concept to a sickening degree.

First submission? A challenging story to live to with any future submissions. Only point I felt was not addressed was the fact that the wives were training the young men to be subservient to the woman first so that they would be rewarded with sexual treats. They would become wimps to their wife or any woman they wanted to please.

This is way better than George Anderson's alternative version No Reply: Answered. In that version thr wife is a scheming, lying adultress who use the "tradition" as cover to have an affair with an 18 year old boy toy (gross) and admitted that if he had denied her implied request, she would have lied and done it behind his back. She also had zero empathy and laxked any hint of apology for what she done, until the Amy flower visit when she was in Ohio. Plus though she claimed that her husband is a wonderful lover and far better than the little fucker (Jeff), her week of illicit sex with an 18nyear old vigorous young man met all her expectations, which she told her husband that she loves so much. In that tale thr manipulation by his mother has little to do with what happened and she knew about what was going on since her son Jason hung the horns on some other poor sap. She even fucked Jeff a couple more times in thhe morning and afternoon before Bill got home but after the week was supposed to be over. It was all planned in that version. Somehow Bill took the bitch back. In this story, it is simpler and more along HDK's trajectory. Debbie only knows about the "tradition" at the Burrows funeral. She was manipulated by her MIL and Janice Burrows and bought into the shit about happy marriages and paying things forward. She never would have gone through with it if he had said "no" on the phone. She acclaims Bill as her husband and wonderful lover. She recognizes the painful loss of joint discovery of sexual acts performed together as a loving couple. There is no mention of Jeff being vigorous and a physical stud (most 18 year olds suck as lovers and get off quicky), able to get it up rapidly, of youth bring superior in some ways to a 40.yr old man (stamina, force, cumshots, loss of exuberant fucking day and night), and anything about "expectations". That was a killer in the GeorgeAnderson version as it shows how much planned and had invested in the affair. No need for deceit with Amy and the flowers. And it was described as a few hours of sex education during the week, not lodging in the house, and after planting, fucking Debbie all hours of the day and night (and past the appointed week time frame). Most importantly this Debbie is sorry from almost rhe beginning when her husband gets back home. This version, Reconciliation works. Not for some of other ones.

There are a lot of men and women on this site that lack a lot of self-respect for themselves. That's the only way i can resolve the dissonance of anybody liking this resolution.

"Oh, Bill! I'm sorry we never had those experiences. Still, you are the best thing that ever happened to me and the best lover".

=== simple but powerful response by Judy. Can go a long way when reinforced and maybe in counseling. But a good start. This is so unlike RichardnGerald's version "No Reply Answered", where the wife was an adulterous slut consumed with obsession and fantasy when she learned of the tradition and only snapped out of it with his (fake) Amy ploy (that he did not do anything with keeping the moral high ground). My point is the latter was a trainwreck that was doomed divorce, where as this version was efficient, rational, persuasive, and well thought out with a believable post tradition premise. Good story.

This is probably the best alternate version of this No Reply story. It is clear, forthright and straightforward. Hearing can occur. Unlike Richard Gerard's version; No Reply Answered, ther was no nefarious reason she told her husband upfront. He still did not tell her now and she betrayed her husband. Butninstead of craving about affair and willing to do it in the future behind his back even if she saidn"no", she regretted it soon after and she says things and takes actions that support reconciliation. The burger issues for forgiveness is with his mother. Much better story. Not sure why low..

Another shit story with no real change from the original. Husband is still a spineless sissy wimp. Another ptheric CUNT writer.

A solid take on his oft told tale. A relatively good first attempt with not much to complain about. No typos or wrong words (ie. balling vs bawling, Scenes vs. seen, drug vs dragged) You show promise, keep enjoying your writing.

The MC should tell his wife and his mother that until he is presented with a young (18 to 20 yo) virgin who is eager to spend a week with him teaching her the wonders of sex, they are to have no contact with him. The wife must live elsewhere until his requirement is met. His mother is an expert in arranging these educational opportunities so it should be no problem at all. If the requirement is not met within one year, however, the husband will file for divorce on the grounds of adultery, and he will consider his mother deceased.

WHAT A STUPID BS STORY. Must have been written by a spineless wimp effeminate man or a man hating feminist bitch!

You still went with glorifying the wimp. Also the whores reaction was something like "i'm going to set fire to my house, it is going to be amazing!" only to later say "maybe burning down my house wasn't the best idea"

Too lame for me. If the husband wanted to kill the tradition he should have had the balls to tell debbie"don't do it". The one part of the story i loved was the shots at his mother. Typical Feministe bull sht. what mother does this. CUCK one of your best friends's husbands while teaching your son It's O to break wedding vows as long as it helps a young man skip some steps? I not think average is too high a rating.

Chain saw all the old trees. Take the newly planted apple trees, uproot them, and then throw them through good ole mommies picture window. Then tell her we are done, and do not back down. Cuckolding is on the rise in society. Every single cuck blog I can find characterizes the cuck as an alpha male. Women in society are generating a massive sales and marketing campaign to convince these losers that they are strong, valued, and oh so important. They even have another term, called hotwife, just a two syllable word for the exact same thing, but the cucks feel strong because after all the years just have hotwifem, they are not really a cuck.Meanwhile, the women are all laughing. When the streets are filled with card carrying smiling cucks, and we no longer have any first responders, military, or even leaders, then all will be well. It should turn out great however, because when inevitable conflict arises the non cucks will know how to throw a punch, how to negotiate a deal, how to fire a weapon, and which bathroom to use. How do you think that will end?

Great ending for an odd story. 5stars.

Amazing how many readers think there is one and only one way that a cuck should react and work out a situation. Stories are supposed evoke reactions and yours certainly did. I hope you take joy in the supportive and ignore the critical remarks and continue to write stories for the web site.

So let me get this straight. She cheated and fucked some.other man for a week in their marital bed...and he is back making love to her within a day or two?

Burn the trees and all is forgiven?

Why are all these continuations of this story so fucking stupid?

Despite author’s belief, this action is too weak to sufficiently address the issues.

The burning of trees was not allowed to spread to any of the offenders who themselves ought to have been TORCHED!

This was a good read. While I see a lot of haters in the comments. I thought it was a good read.

3 stars. Keep writing.

Is there an author out there that can write this story where the hubby comes back and beats Jeff's ass just before he fucks Debbie. So far all the No-Reply stories are cuck/wimp stories.

Throw the whores out. Starting with his mother.

Thanks for the effort. It takes some.courage to submit a story in LW. As to your plot, I think I know what you were trying to, but it’s a bitter pill. Bill fucked up by not being straight forward and telling his wife and mom to fuck off. Had he just flat told his wife he’d divorce her if she fucks the kid, I think that would have ended it. Then he could do all the symbolic tree burning with the other men. As for reconciliation NO FUCKING WAY! The wife should have known better. His dumbass mother should be outed to everyone and then shunned by all.

This is so stupid and cucked

This isn't recovering

She cheated and she is still the good woman wtf

crap

Husband wimp story. Husband needs to kick Jeff's ass. If he wants to fuck another mans wife he better be able to back it up.

stupid shit.

I still hope for a no reply the "fishing trips" were the men going out to Vegas or something and treating the week as a hall pass and any other time they go fishing afterwards

this gem of idiocy ended my moving further though this "I didn't realize it would affect you this much, Bill," as if she changed her planned dinner that day, or burnt the roast.....this was a week of sex.......my god Im not sure which wife was the dumbest twat..HDN's worthless wife in his worthless cuck story or the version you wrote of her.

You neglected to say whether or not they all joined hands and sang Kum ba yah. I have to admit that they're just the sweetest bunch of people I've ever heard of. Course, the story itself was retarded.

Imagine a mother doing all this and then being surprised that it offended some folks? You female characters are as stupid as Anderson's and Knight's. That's not a good thing, in case you're wondering.

Still a fucking cuck story. No recovery possible.

I’m thinking that the men all start having sex with the daughters and teach them how to please a man. Works both ways.

I read it again. I am sorry, but it does not ring true. She spends a week having sex with another young man, then is almost immediately repentant when confronted? No. Then the mother is made to see the light almost as quickly? No. What would happen is the husband goes out back and cuts down all the apple trees. The wife is angry and frightened for weeks. The father finally finds the courage to confront the mother and when things get tense she goes to visit her sister. The father has the maple trees cut down in her absence and either things change or he divorces her. These people were already committed to a practice of infidelity and I don't see them changing their minds so quickly or easily.

The story was so, so. But i am really glad to see somebody put a stop to that shit. There have been several stories about that tree planting cheating ass bull shit. I am glad to see someone say what it is BULL SHIT

Still a cuck

No resolution to this bizarre situation makes sense unless it includes a week during which Bill owes Debbie absolutely no sexual fidelity. Insisting that she and his mother find an 18 year old virgin for him to guide through the Kama Sutra would be ideal but probably a bit too much to require.

I can see the original story really pushed your buttons. Loved your passionate appeal to reason, to let the wife know how he felt and find out whether she cared about his well being. There are a number of stories that have made me want to write an "after the event" story but I have never got round to it, so well done and thank you for your time and effort.

On No Reply: Answered, Bill makes Debbie realize her mistake. It shows Debbie has no integrity. It makes Debbie pay for the consequences.

On No Reply: Hope, Bill makes every men stand on their own conviction. He made every women realize their fault.

Of these two, they lack one missing component, they didn't burn the trees. The trees will always be a reminder of the betrayal.

On your story, Bill shows her mom the consequence of her action. He enlightened every men by symbolically burning the trees.

One thing is missing, Debbie was never made accountable. The two version makes Debbie accountable. You missed the most important component.

2*

Reading through the comments I wonder how many read the original thoroughly. The tradition was that as a teen they'd fuck another man's wife then as a married adult some teen would fuck their wife. It's a circle. I have no sympathy for any of them involved. You can't early fuck another man's wife then suddenly turn on the BTB vibes when it's your turn to be cucked.

Liked it better on the second read. My favorite character is definitely the cousin who divorced his cheating wife, and beat the crap out of her lover.

This isn't the worst outcome I can think of. Bill was firm and decisive, while not overreacting. He taught the women a sorely needed lesson in the process. Not surprising there were some divorced as some wives had no remorse. While a lot of people see this story as black and white, the author explored the gray. 5* from me.

Good first attempt!!! I feel every husband should have divorced the whore wife!!!

So . . . every guy stayed with their cheating whore

No one was cut out of anyone life,

and you seem to be under the impression that burning wood removes the smell of pathetic cuck?

Unnecessary 'sequel', all he had to do was tell his wife 'NO', but he didn't he wimped out, doesn't matter what subsequently happened don't see how he could stay with his wife, no respect either way, poor story

All these bullshit sequels to an idiotic flash story.

In all of them, the protagonist absolves himself of blame, then feels hard done by.

He had the clear opportunity to stop this, but chose not to.

BOO HOO. What an idiot.

at least one cheating bitch got burnt

Excellent!

Stronger man than I. Though I would have said he'll no to her in the first place, when the feed was done I would have left her and her trees. Takes a strength to undo those wrongs.

A strong first effort. Keep writing !

I like the continuation of the other story.

This was the only thing dumber than you having that spineless cuck stay with the whore

New trees are too damt to burn to ash in the 150 seconds from the fires start to the end of his talk with his mother

I'm not sure you're getting the concept of a follow-up to a story. It's taking the scenario as presented and add to it. What you want is a rewriting of HDK's story. If that happens, then it's a just for all intents and purposes a new story.

The challenge of the follow-up is take a story with its flaws and try to salvage it. Bill is in a crappy situation. Yes, he should have said no, but he panicked and left it up to his wife to do the right thing. She didn't. What does he do now? HDK left him as a wussy cuck. GA almost had it right, but he had Bill wuss out.

I think tnoldguy did an admirable job. Bill took care of the situation, burned the damn trees and had the evil practiced ended. That's the best one can do, except maybe give Bill a week with a young lady with Debbie's knowledge and reluctant blessing.

This is certainly not any improvement on HDK’s original story. The only thing he should have said when she called him to tell him she was having trees planted, was NO. End of story, no other response is acceptable, and any deviation from that is just garbage fiction. The fact that all the men he was fishing and golfing with knew exactly what was going on, is enough reason to start burning a whole lot of bridges. Somebody call me when that version of the story gets written.

correct revision of HDK's story is to have the husband say "no", immediately return when he gets the call, and go after the conspirators. There would be plenty of family and community drama to extend the story. The failure to say "Hell no!" and take action makes the HDK and similar sequels idiotic. No one would do that.

This story gets no less ludicrous with repetition, people. And no better.

The original rubbed me the wrong way and this ending doesn't fix things all the way. Someone else wrote an ending with husband making Debbie think he had sex all week with a young neighbor hottie so SHE could feel the pain. Better.

My Dad taught me about respect and thinking of others feelings before I acted. If any of my Mom's friends had tried this on me, I'd like to think I would have walked away because she was SOMEBODY ELSE'S WIFE!

Spare me the defense of HDK. Sure he's a talented writer, but he writes too many wimp stories. Not speaking up when he got the phone call at the lake? Too stupid to be married in the first place.

Still the women always win in the LW category. Now she knows she can get away with cheating so why stop now.

It's amazing how many endings the original story inspired and I still cannot understand why the wife would go along with such a horrible idea!

You took a dire story and ran with it.

Fact is these women effectively got of without so much as a slapped wrist so long as they said sorry. Maybe I may have forgiven the wife, but the boy needed a slap at the very least, a lesson from the wife, then a lesson from the husband, seems only fair.

The mother and Janice would be persona non grata for the guilt he carried and the mess they made of the marriage. The trees AND bed and all the linen would have been burnt on the parents front lawn.

Then, maybe, I might start to 'get over it'.

There are large areas of the US where there are strong matriarchal controls that would just not put up with his response. A family tradition like this is old, probably hundreds of years old dating back to Europe. There are actually well documented such "traditions" often fathers take sons to whores to learn the "arts". There is really no difference other than who is leading this. I suspect very few LW readers would complain if it were a father taking his son or grandson over to learn some new skills.

The stench of hypocrisy is pretty strong.

Nahh, no voting

You did the best you could with this story. Appreciate the effort.

Is that the one where your insipid cucks suck sperm straight from the cock like the little bitches you made them out to be?

Hell of a way to introduce yourself to your readers. You tackled a story that raised a lot of mixed feelings but your submission seemed to cover what many readers were feeling and reflected how many wanted Bill to react. Now we can only hope to see an original story.

AFBlue

as I think about it it's still a family full of pansy men.

but, no f*#king way. goodbye and good riddiance to the woman formerly known as my wife, and adios to the vessel that bore me.

Just crap, the whore should have been kicked to the curb

Very good work for a first effort. Don't buy the benevolent forgiveness, but still a very good follow up.

Ok, I didn't read every line or paragraph. I learned burning of some trees was some sort of symbol, I guess they each represented some terrible event. Nice to burn the effigy of betrayal. Fire cleanses everything. That's why bitches are burned.

I learned from the comments it was some sort of cuckold/swapping/teaching tradition. Wham, reminds me of "Gifted (she was gifted, but I didn't know)." Now I am not claiming the strange ingredient can't be used elsewhere, but, right there it was.

One thing that always gets me is she is allowed to leave "ashamed" while the other culpable party is thrashed with a thresher. I'm all for equal responsibilities and corrective punishment. Not punitive.

If you're retired and enjoying life, you should try enjoying it less by writing for literotica.

my wife would have looked at my mother and "not a chance". Of course my mother would never have done it anyway but still. OTOH, if my wife had just asked, that would have been the end of us. Only question is, would I have sawed off the trees and walked away or would I have stayed there and treated her like shit till she gave up and left. Might have been fun.

medieval so bad?

I liked this follow-up. It addressed the evilness of the scheme and ended it without going medieval. Kudos to Iron Dragon's comment.

I really enjoyed your conclusion to this story. Your characters were a lot more loving and understanding than most.

His wife cheated.on purpose in his bed.

A husband should have to say don't cheat?

Him hanging should have been a clue.

He should have left her.

"I didn't realize it would affect you this much, Bill" - Cheating wives always say something like this! How stoopid can you be? How would the REVERSE affect THEM? THAT'S how it affects your husband.

She says she knew it was wrong, she shouldn't have dumped it on him, especially with no time to think about it. It was his shock that caused him to not answer.

Nice try, but how can you recast the fact that he let his wife fuck a kid for a week. And he's not spurred to action until after he gets back home? And that action is to claim his sloppy seconds??

HDK was gross. This was almost as gross.

It's like the cat didn't cover the turds in the original. You came along and covered them with this story. Thank you.

Well at least the disease was stopped.although too late for most of the men. Not only had their wives broken their wedding vows,but did so in a sneaky,self-serving manner.I doubt any of those men would ever escape the pain of being treated like fools by their wives,who were able to wallow in strange,young cook for a week after many years of marriage. Maybe there weren't a lot of divorces but the marriages had a big hole right in the center.

This story.like the first one is unacceptable to me because 1) Bill foolishly didn't shut Debbie down when he had the chance and 2) Debbie stupidly disregarded her wedding vows ,chose to believe the crock of shit about cheating being a family tradition,sucked and fucked young,strange in the marital bed. Adultery/Infidelity/Cheating and the ability to do it daily for a week is just plain inexcuseable and is an indication that her love for her husband and their marriage just wasn't nearly as strong as she thought it was. 3) Bill's Mother actually though making her husband,then son a cuckold was reasonable to build marital bonding based on sex? Sorry,unloving uncaring out of touch mother,wife,and friend. AND, a bit of a wack-job!

Well written,really enjoyed the story

I was just browsing around and stumbled onto this and couldn't recall if I had read it before. I have to say I preferred your ending to HDK but that's just personal preference.

five stars

Debbie felt that it was Bill's responsibility to tell her not to cuckold Bill? How goddam stupid can one woman be? Bill should kick Debbie out and divorce her ..and name his mom and Janice and Jeff in Alienation of Affection suits. Bill's dad should follow with a divorce from Bill's mother.

No way stay married to Debbie.

This story is almost as bad as the original story. Bill knew what Debbie was going to do before he went on vacation. If he really wanted to stop it, he would of prevented his wife from doing it. The whole then started because the old wives want to cuckold their husband. Their actions didn't really make marriages better!