All Comments on 'Not Just Another Walk in the Park Ch. 06'

Finally! Some action besides all the raping... why do I feel like this is moving into even more raping? Oh well... Keep developing the plot!!! I check this thing everyday to see if you've released the next chapter, I gotta know what's next and I need some background history on Ty(whom I must say went from bad to kinda bad really quick, but I still hate that rapist/poor decision maker)! You're killing me making me wait!

Ps. If all else fails, you can confidently say, you have one superfan!

This story keeps leaving me in more and more suspense!

Damnd russian Mafia.:) I am sure ty will rescue her at the end. 5 stars for that great Story.

cheap attempt at sex and violence

failing at both.

too many allusions to rape and murder wth not enough details to make it sexy or revoling.