by PalmTreesandSand
cheap attempt at sex and violence
failing at both.
too many allusions to rape and murder wth not enough details to make it sexy or revoling.
Damnd russian Mafia.:) I am sure ty will rescue her at the end. 5 stars for that great Story.
Finally! Some action besides all the raping... why do I feel like this is moving into even more raping? Oh well... Keep developing the plot!!! I check this thing everyday to see if you've released the next chapter, I gotta know what's next and I need some background history on Ty(whom I must say went from bad to kinda bad really quick, but I still hate that rapist/poor decision maker)! You're killing me making me wait!
Ps. If all else fails, you can confidently say, you have one superfan!