All Comments on 'Our First Ever Threesome FFM'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
a lousy blow job?

two hot babes and all you get a one lousy blow job??

that's excitement?

didn't fuck the wife

didn't fuck the other girl

did put his tongue up her ass, ohh yea ha

this would be a FF with a m wondering by

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Too simplistic. OK, it was stupid.

What kind of married couple takes one of their boss's out to dinner and ends up in bed? Well, if you work at Harvey's Pawn, or Tony's Tattoos, or similar, then yeah. Guess I was looking at this from a normal adult perspective. Great juvenile story, for juveniles? Just silly and boring.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
gave it a 5 for your effort and the story line

For those like the asshole annony!! Let me say IT'S AA STORY UYOU DOB ASS HICK. IT'S A FICTIONAL STORY AND IN FICTION ASSHOLE(S) ANYTHING CAN HAPPEN!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
need to work

you need to work on story write, names the biggest problems, nice fantasy story but ok to dream thank for the threesome story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
"We had our dinner and drank while waiting for our table."?

Last sentence, first paragraph - you had your dinner, and drinks, before you even got your table?

If that's so, what was it your plates were resting on while you had your dinner?

Or, if you were holding your plates, and eating, where did you put your drink glasses??

impo_61impo_61about 9 years ago
What this story told me...

What this story told me: 1st - those two women had already had sex with each other before that night; 2nd - The boyfriend of the visitor was grateful to his roommate for finding his girlfriend was a slut, and so in no way they were going to marry; 3rd - the husband would be better seated and whatching the two women playing...After all he didn't fuck or even cum...2*

playman64playman64about 9 years ago
Very good.

I think it was a very good story.

I won't criticize something I don't do

Keep writing and sharing.

Steve

sandymonroesandymonroeabout 9 years ago

It's too short and missing the good dirty details!

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