by bucknutscoup
I think it was a very good story.
I won't criticize something I don't do
Keep writing and sharing.
Steve
What this story told me: 1st - those two women had already had sex with each other before that night; 2nd - The boyfriend of the visitor was grateful to his roommate for finding his girlfriend was a slut, and so in no way they were going to marry; 3rd - the husband would be better seated and whatching the two women playing...After all he didn't fuck or even cum...2*
Last sentence, first paragraph - you had your dinner, and drinks, before you even got your table?
If that's so, what was it your plates were resting on while you had your dinner?
Or, if you were holding your plates, and eating, where did you put your drink glasses??
you need to work on story write, names the biggest problems, nice fantasy story but ok to dream thank for the threesome story
For those like the asshole annony!! Let me say IT'S AA STORY UYOU DOB ASS HICK. IT'S A FICTIONAL STORY AND IN FICTION ASSHOLE(S) ANYTHING CAN HAPPEN!
What kind of married couple takes one of their boss's out to dinner and ends up in bed? Well, if you work at Harvey's Pawn, or Tony's Tattoos, or similar, then yeah. Guess I was looking at this from a normal adult perspective. Great juvenile story, for juveniles? Just silly and boring.
two hot babes and all you get a one lousy blow job??
that's excitement?
didn't fuck the wife
didn't fuck the other girl
did put his tongue up her ass, ohh yea ha
this would be a FF with a m wondering by