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"Special Agent Davis of the US Marshal Service," the black man identified himself. "This is Special Agent Nichols," he nodded to the white man beside him. "Will you come with us, please?"
"Do I have a choice?" Joel asked.
"Yes Sir," Agent Davis answered firmly. "You can come peacefully or in handcuffs." People standing around Joel took a morbid fascination in his predicament.
"I am waiting for my luggage," Joel pointed to the carousel that had not started moving yet.
"We've already taken care of that, Sir," Davis said with a perfect poker face.
"I guess you better lead the way, then," Joel said, knowing he had no other options. Special Agent Nichols firmly grabbed Joel's left arm and pushed him toward the exit.
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- COMMENTS
CreativeEdgeralmost 2 years agoI love it, especially the Jenny storyline. The way Joel treats her, and the gentle way he allows her to develop and nearly become his equal in sex is terrific, and I especially enjoy the descriptions of her body, and the sexual relations with Joel.
Almost everything is wonderful, even the extreme sexual "fantasies come true" outside the Jennifer aspect, though their first sexual encounter was quite extreme. There's one fly in the ointment, though, which is the description of Google.
Before that corporation became what it is today, I think it might have been as described. But after the "new ownership," that took over when Alphabet became the controlling interest, is the point at which I believe it's unreal. Google today, as managed by Alphabet, is totally anti-human and one of the great dangers facing humanity.
I think it's even worse than "catnap" control and dominance, firstly because it's NOT just a fantasy, it's truly happening. Secondly, the population that's being dominated is not just women, and they are almost completely unaware that they are being used to destroy their own families and lives, and potentially, humankind itself.
Anonymousover 5 years agoI just wanted to mention Joel flushed a condom down the toilet. That's not something you should do.
MeBr123about 8 years agoGreat character development. Lots of twists and turns. It really shows plenty of thought and planning, on the author's part. GREAT JOB!
One pet peeve- in a fantasy story, I have no use for condoms. We're talking fantasy, with extra-human powers, for crying out loud. A little further fantasy that, maybe the girls are on the pill, taking chances, whatever. The condoms are like throwing a little cold water on an otherwise warm fire.
Anonymousabout 8 years ago"[Lucinda] loaded illegal pornography of the worst kind on this work laptop in a way that looked like he was trying to hide it in the disk partition she dynamically created. Then she transmitted downloaded porn onward to other users."
It was necessary to ensure other people saw this pornography so that Brent could be convicted.
I'm sure if this comes out Lucinda will get a really light sentence as she was only doing it for her boss to ensure a false conviction. Perhaps Joel's lawyers could get her two hours community service?
As there has been no attempt by half a dozen kamikaze women to rescue Brent, presumably Brent is just guilty of looking like the man the three women were asked to I.D.
I like the story but not the 'justice'.
Anonymousabout 8 years agoThis is a very well written story, with a good bit of steamy bits!
Yes I do agree with what one said, how Joel basically 'raped' those girls, but! some of that was before he understood what was happening, and the second bit was about finding out how much 'in control' of them he was. After that he still uses girls, but only if they express a desire to do so. And he did give that one girl a chance. Not much of one, but hey! it is a mind control sex story, lol. Sorry, but I do like the anal bits, lol. Anyways! Fantastic story, I check every day to see if new chapters are loaded. Please keep them coming!
