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Click hereThe pressure in his balls from the eager semen built and radiated upward along his shaft. Clenching his pubic muscles to delay a few seconds more, he gently pressed her hooded area towards his shaft until he could feel the vibrations of his own cock through her stiffened clit.
Her gasps became muffled screams as her muscles clamped down on his cock, again and again, as his semen erupted into her tunnel in an achingly long spasm. As the initial wave passed they paused, with him buried completely inside her to savor the pulses of their internal muscles. Finally he withdrew; they rolled onto the bed in a calm embrace of warm kisses.
- COMMENTS
Beejay36 months agoWow, what a paradise they have entered…and such sensual activity with each other…..my idea of a perfect get together!???? More …more more…could read that for hours!
NaokoSmithalmost 9 years agoI like how you make the companionable nature of working out, and the sporting physicality, as much a part of their pleasure in each other as the sex. You sketch in back story really well, not too soon but when it becomes appropriate.
Maybe we had to guess a bit too much about Paul's feelings at the ending of his marriage? but too much detail there would have spoiled the freshness of his encounter with Cindy.
I was so thrilled at the first condom! and them talking openly about sex, too bad they trust each other so much so I can't review this on my blog, LOL. Hot to trot!
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoI thought it was very well written, bit it ended fairly abruptly, I thought it would be longer and have more of their time together.
curl4everover 17 years agoAuthorThank you for your careful attention to this story. I appreciate your suggestions on making characters' motivations even clearer and I will try to do that in the future. Aside from the fishing trip day, the other two encounters only took a few hours each. I envisioned him taking an afternoon off from work, but neglected to specify. Apologies. An argument over a tricep knot was in fact the real-life event that inspired the whole story -- once the story began to flow on its own, I could perhaps have come up with a better trigger.
I had wanted to be careful about the condom theme, so I did include this line during their first encounter: "Without even waiting for his reply, she rolled a condom onto his throbbing cock."
As a writer who tries to get thing right for the reader, I am encouraged you did not find any more serious problems with the details.
- curl
