All Comments on 'Parfum Ch. 02'

But carried a lot of realism. Well done!

I can't wait for more.

I loved it. Too bad it was just one page. I look forward to the next chapter.

This is great so far. The sexual tension scene was done so well, James was written really well as this horny teen put in this unbelievable situation. Excellent job, looking forward to his upcoming dates!

Hope you write chapter 3 soon!!!! Great premise and very enjoyable reading.

Deftly handled ... great tension!