All Comments on 'Parfum Ch. 02'

Deftly handled ... great tension!

Hope you write chapter 3 soon!!!! Great premise and very enjoyable reading.

This is great so far. The sexual tension scene was done so well, James was written really well as this horny teen put in this unbelievable situation. Excellent job, looking forward to his upcoming dates!

I loved it. Too bad it was just one page. I look forward to the next chapter.

I can't wait for more.

But carried a lot of realism. Well done!