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I have tried my absolute best to be respectful of Arab culture and to create a realistic Arabic character. I've travelled extensively in the UAE and Oman and am planning another trip there in 2017. I love that part of the world, but I'm still a white guy trying to write about the closed world of Arab women, so if there are any mistakes, I can only apologize. I did the best I could.
Robert Lacey's book Inside the Kingdom was an invaluable and interesting resource for learning more about present-day Saudi culture, and I'd highly recommend it. One day, inshallah, the Saudis will loosen their travel restrictions on non-Muslims and I'll get to visit there.
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Juicyplayabout 1 month agoI also don't have intimate knowledge of the part of the world you describe and its people, but I love the respectful way you write and your obvious love for the person and the sex
matuateneiraover 1 year agoBrilliant writing. The discussions between the characters are totally absorbing, and interesting to me. I have given the story 5 stars and I haven't even finished reading chapter 1.
karli1234almost 2 years agoGreat story. I loved reading it. I am not a women but I am muslim and can relate a little bit. you did write well. Thanks
Anonymousabout 3 years agoVery good narrative and build up with a balanced view from all sides. Write more , you are definitely made for it.
Anonymousabout 3 years agoI enjoyed that this was a story well told...I do not know as the author did not as to the accuracy of all elements of the story but they were definitely plausible to this simple man. A.F.C. Somerset.
Anonymousabout 3 years agoI just wanted to say WOW! This is just an amazing beautiful story! You are so knowledgeable and didn’t disrespect the religion or culture! I was cringing at the beginning because usually people write derogatory stuff about Muslim characters but this was very well written!
vanmyers86almost 4 years agoA very fine job! Well written, believable characters, perfect pacing and a delightfully hot sliding scene! I look forward to reading the other chapters in this series.
joelafayettealmost 6 years agoI thought it was great. And that's saying something considering I didn't get the gratification I wanted at the end. Well done. You should write more for us.
Anonymousover 6 years agoI had & still have a lot of appreciation for Arab way of life.
I think that you wrote a very nice story, which is
VERY EROTIC,
TOTALLY REALISTIC,
VERY ROMANTIC.
You DID NOT show any disrespect for Middle Eastern culture.
Love scenes were written from the heart plus they were masterfully crafted. BRAVISSIMO!
Attn: thatsbogus
THANK YOU FOR THIS STORY.
Stridernorthover 6 years agoAt university I met many Saudi men. I have traveled and had Saudi customers. I appreciate the respect and sensual nature of your writing. Have you been to Saudi Arabia yet? Please write more!
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoVery sensitive treatment of Saudi woman's experience. Inshallah you will write more stories as good as the three you've posted so far. Minor, perhaps pedantic critique: Words spelled correctly but not the correct word in a couple of sentences. Also, how did Rania's "miniature marshmallow" sized nipple become huge in the next paragraph? Or did Ryan's stimulation work wonders? But overall, hot story much better than those usually found here.
Anonymousabout 7 years agoBless your heart for being so culturally sensitive and respectful. Not only it inspires respect in the (Muslim) reader, but it also makes the story much more realistic. I'm sure the events you made up here did actually happen to many Muslims in the West. Keep up the good work.
A Muslim student in Canada
Anonymousabout 7 years agoHonestly, mate you've absolutely blew that out of the water. Also, you are very well knowledgeable about the arab culture. I've read some real derogatory stories about Muslims here. But this was exceptional, well done mate. And please please please di another part.
