Parts of Desire Ch. 01

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I have tried my absolute best to be respectful of Arab culture and to create a realistic Arabic character. I've travelled extensively in the UAE and Oman and am planning another trip there in 2017. I love that part of the world, but I'm still a white guy trying to write about the closed world of Arab women, so if there are any mistakes, I can only apologize. I did the best I could.

Robert Lacey's book Inside the Kingdom was an invaluable and interesting resource for learning more about present-day Saudi culture, and I'd highly recommend it. One day, inshallah, the Saudis will loosen their travel restrictions on non-Muslims and I'll get to visit there.

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JuicyplayJuicyplay11 days ago

I also don't have intimate knowledge of the part of the world you describe and its people, but I love the respectful way you write and your obvious love for the person and the sex

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Well written story

matuateneiramatuateneiraover 1 year ago

Brilliant writing. The discussions between the characters are totally absorbing, and interesting to me. I have given the story 5 stars and I haven't even finished reading chapter 1.

karli1234karli1234almost 2 years ago

Great story. I loved reading it. I am not a women but I am muslim and can relate a little bit. you did write well. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Very good narrative and build up with a balanced view from all sides. Write more , you are definitely made for it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I enjoyed that this was a story well told...I do not know as the author did not as to the accuracy of all elements of the story but they were definitely plausible to this simple man. A.F.C. Somerset.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I just wanted to say WOW! This is just an amazing beautiful story! You are so knowledgeable and didn’t disrespect the religion or culture! I was cringing at the beginning because usually people write derogatory stuff about Muslim characters but this was very well written!

vanmyers86vanmyers86over 3 years ago

A very fine job! Well written, believable characters, perfect pacing and a delightfully hot sliding scene! I look forward to reading the other chapters in this series.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
wait

That last line, is this based on a personal experience????

joelafayettejoelafayetteover 5 years ago
Great

I thought it was great. And that's saying something considering I didn't get the gratification I wanted at the end. Well done. You should write more for us.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
I've never been to Saudi Arabia but i did live & work elsewhere in the Middle East for about 6 years. YOU BRILLIANTLY WROTE A LOVE STORY. I GAVE YOU AN A+ (way above expectations)!!!

I had & still have a lot of appreciation for Arab way of life.

I think that you wrote a very nice story, which is

VERY EROTIC,

TOTALLY REALISTIC,

VERY ROMANTIC.

You DID NOT show any disrespect for Middle Eastern culture.

Love scenes were written from the heart plus they were masterfully crafted. BRAVISSIMO!

Attn: thatsbogus

THANK YOU FOR THIS STORY.

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