All Comments on 'Patience'

by Jaisen

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donalde over 13 years ago

great story

was a great story really did enjoy thank you for posting this story and have a great holiday

mokkelke over 13 years ago

a nice little thing to let us realize there is sunshine after it rains ;-)

bigguy323 over 13 years ago

Good beginning, decent middle and a poor ending. There is no drama in "the best revenge is living well".

Action and strong emotion make the story worth reading.

Anonymousover 13 years ago

Beautiful.

Anonymousover 12 years ago

Very Nice

I liked this a lot. The only suggestion would be the ending was hurried. I appreciate endings with closure. Did they get married, if so, did the ex try something to break them up. A lot of "buttons" waiting to be pushed. Lol. You are a good writer. I think you should finish the story. Thank you.

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