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by Jaisen
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Anonymousover 12 years agoVery Nice
I liked this a lot. The only suggestion would be the ending was hurried. I appreciate endings with closure. Did they get married, if so, did the ex try something to break them up. A lot of "buttons" waiting to be pushed. Lol. You are a good writer. I think you should finish the story. Thank you.
bigguy323over 13 years agoGood beginning, decent middle and a poor ending. There is no drama in "the best revenge is living well".
Action and strong emotion make the story worth reading.
donaldeover 13 years agogreat story
was a great story really did enjoy thank you for posting this story and have a great holiday
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