by estelledarkbloom
This was very very good, and, for a first submission, incredibly well-crafted. Welcome to Literotica and please bring us more of this high-quality work. Five stars and thank you for sharing your talent with us.
Lovely and pitch perfect. This story left me sated and insanely curious.
What a wonderfully written first chapter. Every word is perfect. I can't wait to learn of their history, and of what's to come for them.
You are all lovely! Thank you so much for your kind words. I have submitted chapter 2, so please be on the lookout!