All Comments on 'Pet Ch. 01'

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mel_pomenemel_pomeneabout 10 years ago
Excellent work!

This was very very good, and, for a first submission, incredibly well-crafted. Welcome to Literotica and please bring us more of this high-quality work. Five stars and thank you for sharing your talent with us.

elisebeeelisebeeabout 10 years ago
Very nicely crafted!!

Lovely and pitch perfect. This story left me sated and insanely curious.

jhollanderjhollanderabout 10 years ago
Amazing start

What a wonderfully written first chapter. Every word is perfect. I can't wait to learn of their history, and of what's to come for them.

estelledarkbloomestelledarkbloomabout 10 years agoAuthor
Thank you all!

You are all lovely! Thank you so much for your kind words. I have submitted chapter 2, so please be on the lookout!

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