by estelledarkbloom
You are all lovely! Thank you so much for your kind words. I have submitted chapter 2, so please be on the lookout!
What a wonderfully written first chapter. Every word is perfect. I can't wait to learn of their history, and of what's to come for them.
Lovely and pitch perfect. This story left me sated and insanely curious.
This was very very good, and, for a first submission, incredibly well-crafted. Welcome to Literotica and please bring us more of this high-quality work. Five stars and thank you for sharing your talent with us.