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"Here comes your bitch!" Padma says and walks away, I forget her... I only have eyes for one other.

Suddenly Hamsini is there in front of me, we are both so excited that we wet ourselves as we dance around each other. I grab her and we roll over and over on the grass. We are both yelping and barking happily. Hamsini, my beloved Swan Rider, what has your Mother had them do to you? Why did you threaten to go to the Police? Didn't you know how ruthless she is? Why didn't you know better than threaten her/? My mind races as we hug and kiss out there on the lawn. I now know what her mother meant: I also know that some of the dreams that I had experienced were more real than I thought.

The relationship has been reversed: I have been forced into the more dominant role. I am indeed the "dog" to Hamsini's "bitch". She is truly mine now, far more than I was ever hers. I am the faux-male in her life. She is smaller and slimmer than I am, that much has not changed; but her body has been re-shaped just like mine and her breasts are no longer small and pert but she is still fully female with a tiny clitty. Oh, I am still female, I still have my pussy and my large breasts: but I have the one thing that my darling lacks: I have a tool. I take her there and then on the lawn in full view of the house. I mount her and we make love doggy-fashion – which, when I think about it, is more than fitting. She is surprised by the size of my rod and squeals happily as I enter her. After that we both yelp and squeal with passion and enjoy each other's new bodies... Dearest Hamsini, it is no longer you that is my rider... I am now yours, despite the meaning of your name which is woven into your silver collar.

So time passes and we settle down to our life together: two dogs who share a kennel. Anika is our kennel maid: she feeds us and keeps our home clean: often she joins us and we have a threesome – but it is different to how it was in the bungalow when Hamsini was a student at university. It is different because Anika is merely human whereas we are doggy-girls, human-animals, superior. I doubt that Anika realises this, but we do!

I found my notebook in a corner of our summerhouse/kennel, Padma must have ordered that it be returned to me, and so I carry on writing down my thoughts and experiences. It is quite a story

Sometimes another doggy-girl is put in with us for us to train and to reassure: it is often one who is having trouble adjusting to her new role. We help her come to terms with her new life as we enjoy her, er, company.

The years pass and Hamsini and I are happy, we have each other, what more could we ever want?

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kajkellikajkelliabout 2 months ago

Tragedy that the author is no longer writing.

RodimusMikeRodimusMikeover 1 year ago
What should've happened.

Hansa clearly became Hamsini's Pet Dog or Swan but unexpectedly Hamsini fell in love with Hansa.But apparently Hamsini rather losing Hansa she underwent the same transformation as Hansa did,and turned into a Hybrid Futanari Dog Girl rather than live as a human,and her and Hansa could live as Dog Girls in love.

But to be honest I wish they or atleast Hansa could have gotten Hamsini pregnant with her little clitty,and they have a litter of puppy babies and have a new breed of human hybrids that were dogs.Overall this story was an awesome read of weirdness.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Well Written But....

This was well written story but the first person narration destroys the within-story-premise plausibility. To imagine the "heroine" , or is it deranged victim, so casually and so up to every detail description (is she writing notes) of absolutely everything done to her , when she is supposed to be in a constant drugged state is beyond any kind suspension of disbelief, even a very generous one.

The moment that really made me lose hope was when she is first made to endure the daughter riding her face and all she has to say is that she tasted exquisite?! Of course, there is no reaction or knowledge of what she thinks up to that point is her sexual identity or preference in any meaningful way. Many of the problems, and there are many more (the final nail is when all the modifications are in, but that is for another time) derive from not really fleshing out the characters in a more neutral narration.

The writing skills are there without question but abandoning first person for third person would have solved some the problems, to know what the characters are actually thinking, feeling and their reactions, which in this case are not very normal, as if they are all deranged before all the action took place.

WingedLemmingWingedLemmingalmost 4 years ago
Up to a Point

I didn't mind the first round of surgical procedures, much. It was a little weird, but interesting. Perhaps bc I've read a lot of sci-fi/fantasy books where humans fall in love with other races, the idea of cross-species sex between sentient individuals, doesn't bother me much. The second round of surgical alterations took it beyond where I could like it, though. I suppose everybody's got their own line, for that sort of thing.

People are saying it belongs in "non-consent"...well...not quite. There's a "mind-contol" section, and I think it belongs there. The difference is: non-consent means somebody is doing something they *do not* want to be doing. Mind control means they're happy to do it, but only bc somebody made them want it. JukeboxEMCA is a writer on here, try some of their "lesbian sex/mind control" short stories. You might also consider the "non-human" category.

*SPOILERS AHEAD*

I thought it would end with Padma giving Hansa the economist position, after catching their obvious schoolwork scheme, with Anika obviously staying to serve. I wanted the three of them to get to have their happy household together, permanently. At that point, I had already planned to favorite this story. The ending, though, and the way Swan Rider lost everything with such foolishness, just left me incredibly sad. Poor Anika, too, relegated back to obscurity. It was pointless. I don't think I'll read this one again.

LBCNLLBCNLover 4 years ago
Amazing story!

I absolutely loved this story. It just got better and better as it progressed. I would love to see more stories like this from you. Thank you for sharing this :)

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