All Comments on 'Power of Persuasion Ch. 01'

A little like the sex you described, what with being 'wham, bam, thank you ma'am'. However, it was well written and touched what I consider pivotal points, so that somewhat makes up for the shortness of the chapter.

Well I liked what I read and thought it a good intro to many other stories, which I'm looking forward to.

When will the next chapter be out? Love the idea ;-)

Very well done! Can't wait to hear what your creative mind wants her to do next. No limits! sweet!