All Comments on 'Power of Persuasion Ch. 01'

Very well done! Can't wait to hear what your creative mind wants her to do next. No limits! sweet!

When will the next chapter be out? Love the idea ;-)

Well I liked what I read and thought it a good intro to many other stories, which I'm looking forward to.

A little like the sex you described, what with being 'wham, bam, thank you ma'am'. However, it was well written and touched what I consider pivotal points, so that somewhat makes up for the shortness of the chapter.