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Click hereSeveral other grateful boys nearby had been treated to the show as well. Rachel's tits had made their way out in brief, playful flashes as parts of drinking games or dares at various parties throughout the year, but such an extended view was usually only offered to the lucky guys who were about to get even more from her. The orgy of attention on her from the surrounding seats had made Rachel's stomach swell with excitement as she'd taken in numerous pairs of wide, lust-filled eyes. She'd been able to tell how turned on they all were. She'd practically felt them stiffening in their pants. And she'd loved it.
The memories made her smile involuntarily and Rachel shook her head to clear them away. Allowing a few boys to feel her up on a bus ride while others watched hadn't been among her proudest moments, but it had given her what she'd needed at the time. The warm power had obviously since subsided, and it hadn't been long before she'd needed another fix. And that had let to-.
The smile on Rachel's face quickly faded as her eyes flicked over the list of names on her phone once more and settled on one in particular.
Matt.
She thought about how letting Blake and Shane publicly grope her on the bus was such a parallel to what she'd been doing with Matt over the past two months. It was obviously wrong from the start, but for some reason, she let it happen. And it made her feel good in the moment even if she knew that good feeling would only sink her lower when it faded.
Her thoughts went to the last time she'd been with Matt. Wednesday of the past week. Just three days prior. It had started just like any other trek over to his now infamous basement. But it hadn't finished that way.
Rachel set her phone down and closed her eyes just as the dark clouds began to swirl inside her mind.
It hadn't finished that way at all...
NEXT -- Chapter 12: Flipped (Pt. 1)
- COMMENTS
TheRachelChroniclesalmost 8 years agoAuthorAT...you are too kind as usual! I greatly appreciate your glowing recommendation and I'm very glad that you're still on the train. Hope you continue to enjoy.
Anon...thank you very much for your compliment on the dialogue. It's meaningful to me because I really do try hard to make the characters' speech realistic and organic. Writing dialogue is always the hardest and most labor-intensive part of these stories for me but it is also the part that I usually look back on with the most pride. Some of my favorite pieces of this series have been the extended dialogue scenes in various chapters. Rebecca's story about Matt, Rachel's various smartass back-and-forths with various boys, Jim's speech about girls sports, etc. And of course, the big fight between Rachel and Rebecca.
Anyway, sorry for the long reply. You just touched on something meaningful and I was excited to have to opportunity to talk about it more.
Thanks again for reading!
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoThe author has an ear for how people actually speak. It feels real to these scenarios and genuinely adds something to these stories.
Anonymousalmost 8 years ago(I'm sneeking in another comment as Anon.)
I think this author is a pro. There is no way an amature can put together such an outstanding work as this, and on their first try.
If you read one story this month on Lit. I hope this is the one.
asianToy
asianToyalmost 8 years agoI love the characters and the story, haven't enjoyed a series so much in a long long time! Spectacular writing, plot and character development.
asianToy
