All Comments on 'Promising Family Modeling Careers Ch. 05'

This chapter seemed dead compared to the previous chapters as it was only a build up of what hopefully is to come, so I didn't give it a 100. It would be less than a 75 if I felt it wasn't going the right direction. As others have stated in previous comments on your other stories, I would like to see just family incest. You have mentioned Tom showing up so please fulfill this and make it good. Don't concentrate on Allison and Stuart too much. I don't condon family incest, but find the stories a big turn on. It makes me wonder if such things do take place and can be done with out hurt to family members.

I am a mother of 2 boys and 5 girls - I just wish I could have had a relationship like this with at least 2 of them - the story was so gentle but sensual and very erotic - give us more of this family as it progresses with maybe the father involved too - let the photographer and his assistant keep out of the family though - just have each other OK

You wanted a female's perspective. I think this is one of the most beautiful incest stories I have ever read. I will be coming back for more.

This last chapter was somewhat of a let down. The prior chapters were beautifully written. I would like the story to continue, but it has been sometime since the last chapter. Please consider additional chapters.

You have told us that Stuart has a daughter. Can't she join in?

Where is chapter 6

This is most promising, please keep ity going,,

Cheers

W

male

This is a great story and as I said in the title beautiful and hot. You should continue until you finish it.

...so far, please continue. But i think the fifth part was not as good as the other 4.

You never finished this !

I can't believe you just left it mid story.

WHY ?

Talk about anti-climax, pun intended.

Just so disappointed over this.

This series of stories is quite hot, but, frankly, the premise is so unlikely as to make it all slightly ridiculous. I know it's fantasy, but even fantasy needs to be rooted in plausibility. The fact that the author abandoned the story after a failed comeback proves he felt the same way about it. Very disappointing after a promising start.

but unfinished. all the chapters were well written and very sexy - but most were less than a page long. disappointed the writer never finished

Obviously we've no idea why you stopped, but you had the knack of telling really hot story, albeit they were far too short from the readers perspective.

A pity others on here cannot write as erotically you did.

Rapier

(M)

What a disapointing end to a very well wriiten series. Stopping all of a sudden and no more stories written, 31/10/21

I also wish the series had not ended. It was so beautifully written, each and every chapter.

Best to you and hope you will again start writing again.