All Comments on 'Promising Family Modeling Careers Ch. 05'

I also wish the series had not ended. It was so beautifully written, each and every chapter.

Best to you and hope you will again start writing again.

What a disapointing end to a very well wriiten series. Stopping all of a sudden and no more stories written, 31/10/21

Obviously we've no idea why you stopped, but you had the knack of telling really hot story, albeit they were far too short from the readers perspective.

A pity others on here cannot write as erotically you did.

Rapier

(M)

but unfinished. all the chapters were well written and very sexy - but most were less than a page long. disappointed the writer never finished

This series of stories is quite hot, but, frankly, the premise is so unlikely as to make it all slightly ridiculous. I know it's fantasy, but even fantasy needs to be rooted in plausibility. The fact that the author abandoned the story after a failed comeback proves he felt the same way about it. Very disappointing after a promising start.

You never finished this !

I can't believe you just left it mid story.

WHY ?

Talk about anti-climax, pun intended.

Just so disappointed over this.

...so far, please continue. But i think the fifth part was not as good as the other 4.

This is a great story and as I said in the title beautiful and hot. You should continue until you finish it.

Where is chapter 6

This is most promising, please keep ity going,,

Cheers

W

male

You have told us that Stuart has a daughter. Can't she join in?

This last chapter was somewhat of a let down. The prior chapters were beautifully written. I would like the story to continue, but it has been sometime since the last chapter. Please consider additional chapters.

You wanted a female's perspective. I think this is one of the most beautiful incest stories I have ever read. I will be coming back for more.

I am a mother of 2 boys and 5 girls - I just wish I could have had a relationship like this with at least 2 of them - the story was so gentle but sensual and very erotic - give us more of this family as it progresses with maybe the father involved too - let the photographer and his assistant keep out of the family though - just have each other OK

This chapter seemed dead compared to the previous chapters as it was only a build up of what hopefully is to come, so I didn't give it a 100. It would be less than a 75 if I felt it wasn't going the right direction. As others have stated in previous comments on your other stories, I would like to see just family incest. You have mentioned Tom showing up so please fulfill this and make it good. Don't concentrate on Allison and Stuart too much. I don't condon family incest, but find the stories a big turn on. It makes me wonder if such things do take place and can be done with out hurt to family members.