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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Trading places

Great story, if based on truth? What is good for the goose should be re-acted by the gander. No better place than his local sports club.

sexmatesexmateabout 14 years ago
How far will they go?

Looks like it goes farther into the abyss each time.

Bad things can happen if they go to far.

NakedinNCNakedinNCabout 14 years ago
Where do we go from here?

Wow! There are all kinds of places you can take this. Suggest you continue.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Nasty story.

Some fantasies should remain just that. I wouldn't want to act out or see such a fantasy take place.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
A Tease

Nice, but it could have gone so much further

PistolpackinpetePistolpackinpeteabout 14 years ago
Where's this bar??....

....is Rod Serling serving drinks?

whiteslutwifewhiteslutwifeabout 14 years ago
Remember it's a story

I thought this was a forum to explore in.

Great start! Keep it up and let your imagination run wild.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Spelling. Grammar.

Spelling. Grammar.

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